Tasha Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 Martha and Jack and fluff, lots and lots of fluff, right Adz??
shortie_689 Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 ADIA!!!! OH MY GOD I LOVED IT!!!!!!! OH Nina and Johnny the whole concept gets me all excited I love how he is such a BADDY as they say but sooo unbeleivably caring and wants to protect Nina to no end!!! I just OH I LOVE IT!!! And why do I picture Jake to be extremely GOOD LOOKING!!! Do you have any girls in mind for him??? Keep up the great work!!! PLease update soon maybe even with a little more Johnny and Nina fluff oh even the prospect in my own mind gets me all excited!!! PLease update soon!!!
Adia Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 Thankies for your comments! Especially for Paris and Tasha... sorry it's a bit short and sad though... ChapterEightyFive: Martha sat forlornly on the wharf. The tears had not stopped streaming from her cheeks since Jack had left for the station. As much as she loved her family, sometimes they could just smother too much attention on her. Especially during a time like this. The thought of that guy and the look in eyes was etched into her memory. He hadn’t done much to hurt her, but she had a fair idea of what he had been thinking. She thought of Jack and the look in his eyes whenever he looked at her. That made her feel safe, and she closed her eyes and wished that he was there with her… right… now… “Martha?” Jack said sitting down next to her. “Alf told me you left? Is something wrong?” “No,” Martha said wiping her cheeks. “I just needed some time on my own. Try and get my head around everything.” “Martha, I won’t let that guy hurt you. He won’t come after you, I won’t let him.” Jack wrapped his arms around her, and held her. Everything about her was so sweet, from the softness of her skin, to the strawberry scent of hair. Jack could not imagine his life without her, and the threat of someone about to hurt her, hurt him even more. “I feel so weak Jack. After they barged in, I froze. I shouldn’t have froze! I could’ve stopped them! I’m so weak, I shouldn’t be crying” she sobbed into chest, clutching him tightly. “Martha, I think that you were brave,” Jack told her. “You have handled yourself so well, it’s okay to cry Martha. If I have to... I’ll cry with you.” That made Martha weep even more. “Listen,” Jack said cupping her face in his hands. “How about we go home and we just chill out. Just the two of us. No police, no hospitals, no criminals around… just you and me. We can do what ever you like…” Martha smiled at him and wiped the tears off her face. “I just want to be with you Jack. No one else around.” Jack kissed her and helped her to stand up. As they walked down the wharf he stayed close to her, intertwining their hands together. “Tell you what, we should stop by the diner and grab some of that awesome chocolate cheesecake!” Jack laughed. “That sounds good!” she said happily. “I would love that.” They walked up to the diner, hand in hand. Martha finally had a smile on her face. A guy walked out of the diner and crashed into them, dropping his drink on the ground. Jack bent down to help clean up some of the mess, while Martha looked on. The guy stood up but fixed his eyes on the ground. “Ahh sorry about that mate,” the guy said to Jack. “It’s alright…” Jack told him. Before he walked off, he brushed against Martha, sending a chilling feeling down her spine. She thought nothing of it, looking at the guy as he walked away. She had no idea who he was. He stood behind the cars in the ca rpark, watching as Jack and Martha walked home. He would get her… he thought violently to himself. And he would get her good…
-ParaisGal- Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 Don't you dare! That is mean! Great going though.
Martha_Jack Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 oh my god, you better not let him get her. Update soon.
Tasha Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 Adz, you are in massive trouble. You are, i repeat you are not allowed to hurt Martha. That guy is not allowed to lay a hand on her, and Jack is not allowed to let Martha out of his site. When he goes to the bathroom, she goes with him, and vice versa Ok maybe not that bad but still, nothing is allowed to happen to her, you hear me. OK im gonna shut up now. Great chapt though More please
Tasha Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 you shouldnt come out of hiding now, otherwise i'll be hunting you down in NZ
xsianx Posted February 2, 2007 Report Posted February 2, 2007 Adia - I'm not happy. *Tries not to smile* The J&M moments - were cute! the offer of crying was adorable. The man at the end - that was horrible!
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