beckyboo Posted February 9, 2007 Report Share Posted February 9, 2007 Oh my God poor Martha Update ASAP Make Jack go in and give her a big hug!! update soon hun xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted February 9, 2007 Report Share Posted February 9, 2007 Oh no! Poor Martha! Shes re-living the nightmare! Hopefully Jack will get her out of it Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted February 9, 2007 Report Share Posted February 9, 2007 I loved the whole Kim/Martha/Jack/Rachel scene. Very well wrote. Your a great writer Adia. Poor Martha Grrr to Johnny ( ) lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted February 9, 2007 Report Share Posted February 9, 2007 That was brilliantly wrote. Loved the bit about Martha and the glass smashing. I feel so sorry for her. I hope Jack saves her again. Update soon Adia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted February 9, 2007 Report Share Posted February 9, 2007 last two chapters great poor martha update please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 “It was… it was life,” he answered quietly. “The gang was like a family. But it’s so intense, like you lose yourself somehow." Great description. I just, I wasn’t like those guys… I couldn’t hurt people anymore and one day I realized that there was a whole other world out there,” he choked back some of the emotion that was building up inside of him. Again, great description, especially he choked back some of the emotion that was building up inside of him. “I’d like to have known more about what happened on that particular “one day” tho... Nice scene with Martha and Jack. I’m intrigued by the ending tho. I thought nothing had happened to Martha. ps After all that talk of cheesecake and chocolate I had to eat a trifle! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shortie_689 Posted February 12, 2007 Report Share Posted February 12, 2007 ADIA I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! I just love Mattie and Rocco together, Mattie and Rocco fluff is just as good as Nina and Johnny fluff ME LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!! Poor Martha, Love to see what happens next please oh pretty please update soon!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted February 12, 2007 Report Share Posted February 12, 2007 Thanks guys for your nice comments. I know I usually update over the weekend and I'm so sorry that I didn't! But I might be able to get a chapter up when I come home from work tonight. I'll see how I go... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted February 12, 2007 Report Share Posted February 12, 2007 Thats fine Have fun at work I actually thought you had updated and I was like yess this will take me out of my depression one word-Sam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lewis Posted February 12, 2007 Report Share Posted February 12, 2007 The last two chapters were awesome =]!! Update soonish please or when you can =]] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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