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All That You Can't Leave Behind


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That was brilliantly wrote. Loved the bit about Martha and the glass smashing.

I feel so sorry for her.

I hope Jack saves her again.

Update soon Adia.

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“It was… it was life,” he answered quietly. “The gang was like a family. But it’s so intense, like you lose yourself somehow."

Great description.

I just, I wasn’t like those guys… I couldn’t hurt people anymore and one day I realized that there was a whole other world out there,” he choked back some of the emotion that was building up inside of him.

Again, great description, especially he choked back some of the emotion that was building up inside of him. “I’d like to have known more about what happened on that particular “one day” tho... :blink: Nice scene with Martha and Jack. I’m intrigued by the ending tho. I thought nothing had happened to Martha.

ps After all that talk of cheesecake and chocolate I had to eat a trifle! :P

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ADIA I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!

I just love Mattie and Rocco together, Mattie and Rocco fluff is just as good as Nina and Johnny fluff ME LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!! Poor Martha, Love to see what happens next please oh pretty please update soon!!!

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Thanks guys for your nice comments. :)

I know I usually update over the weekend and I'm so sorry that I didn't! But I might be able to get a chapter up when I come home from work tonight. I'll see how I go...

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