tasha7905 Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 Wicked Chapter. I cant believe this Karl guy I hope Johnny hurts him. I love the relationship between Nina and Johnny its very intense and emotional and you right it brilliantly. Cant wait for more.
vale4eva Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 Oh golly, im not liking the sound of this: Next: Martha comes face to face with her attacker as he takes his plan one step further.. Martha needs to use her self defence to kick that son of a b*tch to hell and back! Go Martha! You can do it! Please dont hurt her Adia! Please Looking forward to the next one
I love music Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 Wow, that was a fantastically written chapter! The air was warm of course, but she shuddered as the rustling trees around her whispered the thoughts that were running through her head. Even the trees had stopped taunting her. Instead, they hushed each other and they patiently watched and they waited. And even though there was a slight breeze in the air, the trees were still; they were hushed. Even they waited, and she knew... Loved the way you wrote about the trees. Really set the scene. Great description. He wiped away the solitary tear that filtered from her eye. “Yeah, you make me weak. But I need you. I need you to give me my strength. You… and Roc… you’re the only people that I’ve ever cared about. The only people that I would anything for…” Aww, so Johnny’s not totally evil then...! But Karl is! This guy could give the Summer Bay Stalker (and maybe all the Summer Bay baddies put together ) a serious run for their money...
xsianx Posted February 15, 2007 Report Posted February 15, 2007 That was beautiful and intense. I think has got to be one of the best chapters so far The song fitted in very well with the emotions be displayed. I loved it!!! I hope Martha will be ok... Great writing and description.
>>Emma<< Posted February 18, 2007 Report Posted February 18, 2007 I loved the last 2 chapters It was wonderfully written. Can't wait for more, update soon please!
beckyboo Posted February 19, 2007 Report Posted February 19, 2007 Update Update Update Adia Please please please or I will never update mine Update soon xxxxx
Adia Posted February 19, 2007 Report Posted February 19, 2007 Sorry guys! I have been bit lazy... Update will be tonight when I get home from work!
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