SfanS Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 PARIS! We made a deal, remember? You can't kill Rach!
SfanS Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 PARIS! We made a deal, remember? You can't kill Rach!
SfanS Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 Hey guys. I'm updating now coz I might not get to update a lot in the next few weeks, it's hectic! I won't tell you my whole busy schedule, here it is! Part two: Rachel felt tears coming on, and she wiped them away with the back of her hand. Not another Bay resident, she thought to herself. She thought she better call everyone and let them know, starting with Martha. Rachel sighed as she dialled the number. This sure was going to be a hard phone call to make. Martha answered her ringing phone. " hello? Oh hey rach. Have you seen Jack? He is being SO frustrating lately! He didn't even come HOME last night! And- wait, what? Oh my God! No!" she cried, as Rachel delivered the news. She dropped her phone, collapsing on the floor in tears. Sure, they were having problems, but she loved him all the same, with all her heart. TWO DAYS LATER Martha nursed Riley in her lap. Alf sat beside her on one side, and jack sat on the other. She could hear him talking to her, whispering quietly in her ear. No one else could hear him, he was her guardian angel, and he promised to help her, he told her, as she had a lot on the road to come. Lucas tried to listen to the priest, but it was so hard. Everyone looked sad, even those who weren't that close to Jack. How could they pretend they knew him, they loved him, they missed him, when they didn't? It was Lucas's father, then his brother. No one understood. Lucas didn't realise how much he was crying, until he suddenly realise how many tears he'd cried. Belle, who had come to comfort him, sitting beside him, slipped an arm around him, wiping the tears off his face. " It'll be okay" she whispered. 'Liar' he thought to himself, as another tear streamed down again. After the funeral, Martha went to her room. She wanted to be alone. Not with Riley, not with no one. She still felt as though he was with her, but slowly fading away. She needed him. She remembered what she'd done the previous afternoon. FLASHBACK Martha took a test from her pocket. She goes into the bathrrom, and comes out. After a few minutes...Positive. END OF FLASHBACK Martha began to cry. " I can't do this without you Jack" Please review. Short, but if you put it together, it's a normal chapter.
shen Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 woo jacks dead! (did i just say that out loud?) lol, so martha is preggers is she? hmmm, she'll live. However, I do feel sorry for Lucas though. Losing jack and tony. Poor kid. UPDATE SOON!!!! I went out about 2 hours ago and was very happy to see two updates from when i was last on. Lets have two more today!!!
Drew Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 Killing Jack was a great thing for this fic, now you only have to kill Martha Actually, Martha is alright without Jack. But Martha's pregnant! Oh my god! That sounds familiar... The wife ends up pregnant after the husband dies... Hmmm... Great updates though!
SfanS Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 LOL. It's just that I'm doing a lot of updates these days because this week and next week: Pure pandemonium. For instance: My Mum's going away (don't ask) School Captain try-outs (wish me luck) Our School Concert (it's gonna be big! Have you seen High School Musical? We're doing those songs. We're all in this together, getcha head in the game, and breaking free) and other stuff as well...plus my brothers have things too, eg. exams. So yeah. I just felt like telling everyone my schedule plans,LOL
Drew Posted November 5, 2006 Report Posted November 5, 2006 LOL. It's just that I'm doing a lot of updates these days because this week and next week: Pure pandemonium. For instance: My Mum's going away (don't ask) School Captain try-outs (wish me luck) Our School Concert (it's gonna be big! Have you seen High School Musical? We're doing those songs. We're all in this together, getcha head in the game, and breaking free) and other stuff as well...plus my brothers have things too, eg. exams. So yeah. I just felt like telling everyone my schedule plans,LOL It sucks when you have alot of stuff on now and you're trying to update your fic. That's why I took a break and wrote a few chapters during that break so i'm a bit ahead when it becomes to hectic
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