shen Posted November 11, 2006 Report Posted November 11, 2006 woo great chapter!! What made Rachel scream? Is she in labour? Can't wait until the next update so make it soon!
Adia Posted November 11, 2006 Report Posted November 11, 2006 Next time: What made Rachel scream? Something to do with Jake? Who did Amanda murder? leo? Will Dan REALLY give up that easily? No he never does Why is Annabelle upset? she doesn't want to go to her dad's? What is Jakes plan... something psychotic? Will he succeed? NO WAY! Just my guesses... can't wait for your next update!! Whenever you possibly can please!!
SfanS Posted November 12, 2006 Report Posted November 12, 2006 Ha, LOL..... been working on my School capt speech for Wed...wish me luck! LOL.... Here's the chapter! You'll find out... Chapter 28: Scream, girl, scream... As Kim rushed up to Rachel, she trembled, the piece of paper shaking in her hands. Kim gasped, as an anger like no anger filled him. "The bastard" he muttered angrily, immediately wanting to kill the guy.... The sheet of paper read the words. I HOPE YOU'VE MISSED ME....with pictures of Rachel as a collage covering the rest of the space. It was obvious it had all been done by Jake though. Rachel stared at the "artwork" in horror. She ran her fingers down some of the pictures. Her own body in the shower were the ones that made her feel sick. There were ones of her walking down the beach, of taking care of Annabelle, the list went on.... The next morning Dan went down to see Amanda, hoping he'd find out what had happened. Why couldn't she tell him? (Guys, I just realised that she wouldn't go to jail STRAIGHT away) She was at her house. Word had gotten around, so he fought off the mob that surrounded her house. Suddenly he caught sight of one of the articles in the paper. “Drama teacher and mother Amanda Vale has been reported for the death of Leo Simmons 3 years ago" Dan didn't bother to read it all. He gasped, and ran all the way back to wherever he came from...The woman he had fallen for...was a murderer..... 'The police had tried and tried to catch Jake, why couldn't they just catch him!? I need to be ensured that everyone's safe' Kim thought to himself angrily. He was still full of anger, fuming at what Jake had done. He called Kit and Hayden to let them know about Jake again, he couldn’t put Annabelle or ANYONE in danger. Lucas and belle walked along the beach, kicking up sand, jumping when they heard a scream. A young Asian girl, around 9, was crying and screaming at the top of her lungs, sitting and lying around in the sand. Belle and Lucas ran up to her, trying to settle her down. Belle out her hand on the girl’s arm, but she obviously didn’t like being touched, as she bit Belle’s hand as hard as she could. Belle tried to pull Lucas away, saying that the girl was feral and they shouldn’t bother, but Lucas wanted to help her. They couldn’t leave a young girl just like that. He saw Irene park her car and he yelled up to her as loud as possible. Thankfully, she heard him. “What’s wrong, love?” she asked him urgently, before spotting the young girl. “We need to get her to hospital!” Lucas exclaimed. They tried to get her up to Irene’s car, but she wouldn’t budge. They needed to help her, so it called for something desperate. They picked her up, and took her to Irene’s car, telling her it’d all be okay. They strapped her into the seat, trying to get her to talk to them, tell them or name- SOMETHING! Unfortunately, the girl wasn't as dumb as they thought she was. While they sped to the hospital, she sneakily undid her seatbelt, and opened the door, jumping out of the car, landing on the road. Rachel, who had been driving in the lane the girl had landed on, pushed down her breaks, just missing the girl on the road. She ran out of her car to lend a hand.... "Why are you helping her? She's feral!" Belle moaned to Lucas for the millionth time that hour. Lucas shot her an icy glare. " Shut up Belle, she needs help!" he exclaimed. going over to Irene to lend a hand. Belle folded her arms crossly and sulked. So much for a romantic date. On their way to the hospital, a black car with dark tinted windows drove slowly behind them. Glancing in the rearview mirror, Rachel checked to see if she recognised, or if it was someone she knew just playing a stupid trick on her. She couldn't see through the dark windows, and didn't recognise the car. When they parked their car, the black one parked as well, a few spots away from them, although they didn't get out. Rachel shook her head. How peculiar. Dr. Green was set onto the girl, and tried to fix her wounds. he put a touch of cream on, and she gave a loud scream, hitting him, pushing him away and trying to get out of the bed. Dr green and Rachel shook their heads, how were they supposed to fix her. They tied her to the bed, it wasn't the nicest option, but it was the safest for everyone. Kim suddenly arrived, he was here to see Rachel. "hey" he greeted her happily. "Ready to go yet?" he asked. " Not quite...do you mind waiting awhile? it shouldn't take TOO long, but it's pretty busy here right now" she told him. Kim told her it was no problem, and walked over near a door, and began eating a chocolate bar. He suddenly heard a little moan from the young girl Lucas and Belle had rescued. she reached out to Kim, as if he wanted his chocolate. "What? This?" he asked her. The girl nodded. Kim had an idea. "Do you know how to talk?" the girl didn't answer. "If you tell me your name, you get the bar...deal?" he asked her. He had a feeling this was the psychoatic girl Belle was going on about, when he had seen her outside. "Bianca" she said quietly. Kim smiled at her, and she gave a small smile back as he gave her the rest of the chocolate, which she gobbled up. Rachel, who had come in to check up on her, saw them as she stood at the door. Had kim made a breakthough? Sorry if you think it's short, I honestly don't know what you think of length. I had the idea of Bianca awhile ago, and put my plan into action just then...please review!
Drew Posted November 12, 2006 Report Posted November 12, 2006 Good chapter Yay hehe. Bianca? The rumor that was going around that she's related to Belle? That Bianca?
SfanS Posted November 12, 2006 Report Posted November 12, 2006 You'll see! here's the first bit, a little teaser thing, whatever "I was thinking we could go see a movie today....kay Luc?" belle asked him cheerfully. Lucas didn't asnwer. "What's wrong? Talk to me!" "Why didn't you want to help Bianca today?" he asked her slowly "Does it matter!?" "Yeah. yeah, it does actually. Coz belle, that was really selfish. She needed help, but you just called her names and wouldn't help her, when she needed us. That was really low" he told her "Oh, come ON! She bit me for christs sake!" Belle exclaimed "You made the first move, though, being like that and all. I don't think I canbe with someone like that." he said, walking out of the room... Kim spent most of his afternoon in their with Bianca. She actually did talk to him, so all the doctors thought that she was fine now. They didn't know where she'd come from, who she was, or what they were going to do with her, but they prayed that Kim would be able to help them with that. Dan walked past the crowd of protestors that had formed around Amanda's house, fighting them off to get inside, shutting the door firmly infront of 3 news reporters and interviewers faces. "Dan! What are you doing here!?' Amanda exclaimed happily. "Why didn't you tell me you were a murderer?" He asked her "It never came up!" she said. "I thought you were a good person, I'm inlove with you for gods sake!" he exclaimed. Amanda paused. "Excuse me?" she said, knowing exactly what he had said, feeling a rush of happiness. "I don't know!" he groaned, sitting down on the lounge. She sat next to him, and put an arm around him. "I am a good person...but I can be bad" she said seductively to him, whispering in his ear. They both leaned in, and began kissing passionately. Not caring that everyone could see through the windows, Dan went ontop of Amanda, taking his shirt off, as the onlookers from outside took their pictures...what a scoop! Next actual chapter up tomorrow
shen Posted November 12, 2006 Report Posted November 12, 2006 lol at dan and amanda! Great teaser, can't wait until the next update
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