shen Posted November 23, 2006 Report Posted November 23, 2006 Great chapter! Wow there was a bit of cheating going on there! Please don't make Rach and Kim break up... Martha on the other hand..meh, not fussed Great work and update soon !
SfanS Posted November 27, 2006 Report Posted November 27, 2006 Challenge... I have serious writers block! I've had an idea to get my chapters back on track! Someone, whoever feels like it, does a quick chapter for me, and it solves the storylines we have now, and introduces new ones! That would help me, I'm sure. ANYONE PLEASE! Thanks in advance.... Sarah....
~Rosey~ Posted November 27, 2006 Report Posted November 27, 2006 What happened with Dave and Rachel? Dave will fly to the moon and never ocme back. Rachel doesnt care whatsoever Will Martha and Leo continue a relationship? No they wont. Will KIm find out about Dave and Rachel the night before? No because Dave will be on the moon Will KIm and Rach break up? No, they will happily get marriend. The end
-ParaisGal- Posted November 27, 2006 Report Posted November 27, 2006 Sarah, no relationship for Maccy! Bring Jack back I say! Do what I did! WITNESS PROTECTION SARAH! I'll do it, Sarah! Hehe. I'll write the next chapt
SfanS Posted November 28, 2006 Report Posted November 28, 2006 LOL< Rosey, your idea was too good to refuse... Here's the chapter: Chapter 35: On the moon. Martha angrily stormed out of the bar, humiliated. How could Lucas do that to her? Here bloody life, and her bloody sons were none of his damn business! Who she dated, what she did, and where she did it all had nothing to do with him! She stomped the rest of the way home, slamming the door shut as she entered. Looking around her, Rachel quickly hurried home back to Kim, hoping she could avoid his questions about what she had done, and where she had been last night. She suddenly whirled around as someone came up behind her, and gave a sigh of relief when she saw it was just Dave. "I wanted to say goodbye..." he told her gently "Why?" Rachel asked stupidly. "I told you, didn't I? I have a mission today, and I may not see you again" "What mission?" she siad blankly. Surely, he could remember that she was drunk and all she could remember was making love with him, not anything he told her inbetween. "I;m an astronaut, remember? I'm going to the moon today!" Rachel gave him a strange look before turning around and walking off. She didn't care. She was glad she'd never see him again, it would just be easier for them all. Kit came in to the bachelor pad to drop Annabelle into her father. Annabelle bolted to her father immediately, for a welcoming hug, but was offended when he waved her off as he was taking care of Rosey. Annabelle felt unloved, and went off to her room, sulking. "Don't wory about her, she'll be okay. So, I gues you had a big night last night" Kit teased Kim, presuming that the man she saw with Rach had been him. Little did she know... "What are you talking about?" he asked her, confused. "You and Rachel were really getting close on the dancefloor last night..." "Rach and I didn't dance last night. IT was probably some other couple" he told her. Rachel stood outside the door, she had heard everything. She gave another sigh of relief. That was a close one. She entered the house as Kit came out, with neither KIm or Kit suspecting anything, so she pretended nothing was wrong and smiled and nodded fakely and happily. But deep down, she was sick inside. Annabelle raced out of her room, determined to show Her father and stepmother her new song she had learnt at pre-school. "TWINKLE TWINKLE CHOCOLATE BAR, MUMMY DRIVES A BIG WHITE CAR!" she sung as loudly as she could, but her little sister burst into tears at the loud noise. "Annabelle! Don't! Can't you see your sister is trying to sleep!?" Rachel scolded her. Annabelle began to cry. "YOu're not my parents anyway! I want my Mummy!"she cried, before running into her room, upset. RAchel sighed. Kit flicked over the page of the christmas magazine that lay in her lap. It was so quiet without her loud little girl tearing around the house. Hayden came through the door after finishing his shift. "Gosh, it's quiet" he said, kissing Kit first. "I was just thinking that!" KIt exclaimed. Hayden looked down at the magazine she was reading. "KIt, come on..." he said "What?" "Chirstmas? Already?" "Yeah! IT's soon, anyway. What do you want to do for it, any way. Christmas, I mean." "I don't know..." KIt rolled her eyes. So helpful. Hayden left again to get lunch, and the thought of the quietness came across her mind again. She didn't like the quiet... Peter came home, panicked. He realised that VJ was gone, and so was Colleen, who was minding them. He quyickly dialled her number. What had happened to him? Before Colleen answered, Dan came through the door with both VJ and Ryan. Peter slammed the phone down angrily when he saw DAn enter. "What the HELL do you think you're doing!?" Peter demanded once the boys had gone into another room. "I took MY boys out to the beach, if that's okay with you" Dan told him. "No, it's NOT okay actually. They're MY sons, because Amanda and Leah both left them to me, and you know why THAT was? Because they both loved me more than they could ever love you!" he retorted, mainly out of anger. Dan had had it, though, that was enough to make him blow up...his fist came out of nowhere for Pete, and it slammed him down, out cold onto the floor.... PS. THose who don't know, I do have another fic up and running. Just Like Heaven.
shen Posted November 28, 2006 Report Posted November 28, 2006 haha daves going to the moon!! haha good one! Update soon, any update is a good update
-ParaisGal- Posted November 28, 2006 Report Posted November 28, 2006 Keep Martha single and you're fine, Sarah. Good going..
~Rosey~ Posted November 28, 2006 Report Posted November 28, 2006 And make sure my Rachie gets married
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