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This is getting addictive. As I've just told Layne all my ideas, I think that I'll work on it now, coz I really want to get them all down! Here it is:

Warning: A few things in here even I shouldn't know about! Enjoy!

Chapter 6: You're an obsession now

Kim, totally confused, and angry at Rachel for going and doing what she did with Jake, leaned forward and kissed Kit. He held on to her, and Kit kissed him back for a moment, before pulling away. She knew that she could take advantage, but it was wrong. Unfortunately, Jake wasn't able to see that.

Rachel got up early, and dressed, thinking about all that she'd done with Jake. It replayed in her head, what she'd done. It was bad, it was wrong, and she shouldn't have done it. But she did. Because she had a force in her, as a rebel, and an urge to be with him. He knew about women, he could get her if he wanted, because he knew how to love her, or pretend to, to look into her eyes, and be able to get her to want him, to kiss him, to do anything he wanted them to. It was hypnotizing.

"Oh, God, Kit I'm so sorry. That was just stupid, it's just with Jake, and Rachel, and....Oh, I'm just so stuffed up!" KIm exclaimed. "Aw, Kim, don't worry. It'll be okay, I promise. Give it time, she'll come back, I'm sure of it" KIt tried to reassure him.

"Hey!" Jake said, coming up behind Rachel, hugging her from behind, kissing her neck. Rachel forgot all she was going to say about taking it slow, and kissed him back, and they walked back up to his apartment.

LATER THAT DAY

As Rachel walked along the beach, kicking sand, she saw Kim's figure, and headed towards him. They needed to talk. "Kim!" she called out. He didn't respond. but she caught up with him.

"Have you had fun playing with Jake?" he said sarcastically

"Ummm.... I'm not going to answer that so-"

"You're not wearing you're wedding ring!?" Kim asked, outraged, when he noticed her finger had a line of where the ring used to be

"Oh, yeah, I guess I took it off and didn't put it back on and-" she tried to begin

"He took it off, didn't he? Whatever Rachel. I don't care. You've been staying at his place, I guess?"

"Ummm....yeah..."

"Okay. Tell me when you''ve got the divorce papers" Kim said, walking off, angry, and hurt.

Rachel walked back to Jake's, her new home, depressed. Jake was there to greet her when she walked in. "Hey....are you okay?" he asked, kissing her first.

"Umm...Um...no, actually....I'm not!" she cried, breaking down in tears. She took her wedding ring, and fiddled with it, not putting it on her finger. "I don't know. I mean, I'm not with Kim, I don't want him, I want you... you, and if I don't wear the wedding ring, it's weird, and then...oh, I just don't know anymore!"

"Hey, hey, hey....Look, why don't you wear it, so it's not weird, but pretend....that that's the ring I got you....and we're married" Jake said. "I know it sounds weird, but....it could help?"

"Yeah...I guess. I might even like being married to you" Rachel laughed, as he slid the ring on her finger "I may kiss the bride" Jake joked, but pulled her closer, and leaned in towards her, first looking into her eyes, as he always did, before she closed them, being sent off into her merry go round.

Rachel couldn't help it. She needed him, to be close to him, to let him hold her, and it felt so wonderful. She was beginning to forget what romance with Kim was like. She remembered at the beginning of their relationship, there were sparks, and they could just fool around, but they didn't do that anymore. They didn't have many romantic nights, or time alone, to just hold eachother, or something. And that's what she missed. But she had Jake, and that mattered.

A WEEK LATER

Rachel had been having days like that all week. Her and Jake,always together, him looking into her brown eyes, and he was always ontop of her, kissing her, hugging her, and at first it was romantic, then a bit annoying. With Kim, they were together, but not always having sex (sorry, don't know how else to put it) like Jake seemed to want with her every single night, or day for that matter. At first, she did want him, too, and still did, but if it's romantic all the time, then it loses it's romance.

Kim had tried to deal with his losing Rachel in different ways. Moping around the house= boring, depression, going drinking every night = awful hang overs, and trying to feel on top of everything= a major break down. Nothing worked. Although she had hurt him, he wished he had her back.

Rachel wouldn't admit it, but she was starting to miss Kim. She was being to picky though. One minute, she wants Jake, next Kim,l then Jake again, now Kim AGAIN. If she wasn't careful, she'd lose it all. She went past Jake's little room she'd never been in before, and went to look in. On the screen were pictures...of her. All different ones, in different scenes. Walking on the beach, sleeping and worst of all, her naked body changing and in the shower.

Hope you liked it, see ya! Please review! :D

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Great chapter SfanS! Jake sounds like a serial stalker to me. I look forward to the next chapter and where this is storyline is going to lead now that Rachel has found out his little secret.

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Hey guys, thanks for your comments, the idea is going to lead to a lot....here is the chapter 6:

Rachel looked through all the photos. All different angles, rooms and places. She came to the ones of her and Jake together, who had taken them? The ones with her with no clothes on, in the shower, made her feel sick. She jumped a mile when she felt a hand on her shoulder. She didn't have to turn around to know who it was. "Having fun?" Jake whispered in her ear.

Rachel was afraid, and felt humiliated in foolish. All she wanted at that moment was Kim...and she'd stuffed that up. He took his hand off her shoulder, and pinned her against the wall instead. "You shouldn't be in here!" he shouted at her, pressing one of his hands to her neck, making her gag. "I trusted you!" Rachel managed to get out, spluttering "How could you go and do that? It's sick!?" But Jake didn't loosen his grip.

"You wouldn't dob me in, would you? We're together now, Rachel, you're in love, remember? I only take those photos because I love you....I LOVE YOU!" Jake shouted, not letting go of her. "Now, if you tell anyone what's been happening, I'll hurt you.....and the rest. ANYONE you love will pay....okay? So we'll be together, you'll let me take those photos, and no one will find out"

Rachel couldn't believe he was even doing this. He was sick, he needed help. But he wouldn't listen. "I, I need time to think" she stuttered

"NO! No, you don't. You're with me, and that's final!" He shouted. "Now, you won't come in here again, will you?" Rachel shook her head. She knew that in situations like this, you shouldn't keep quiet, but right now, she couldn't risk anyone getting hurt. He pressed up against her, as he used to, but more aggressively this time. He kissed her, and there was no way she could refuse, or he'd hurt her or someone else. She was scared, but gave in, and went back to him, but there wasn't the same, romantic feeling there was before. Now, just pure sickness and dirtiness.

Jake kept his eye on her twent-four-seven. He didn't let her out of the house, he called in to her work saying she got a better job offer, and hung up. He didn't leave the house either, just stayed with her, and never let her out of his sight. He often would try and have his way with her, and she couldn't fight back. Not with the danger she was in. She missed Kim, and Annabelle, and Brad, and everyone. She missed the beach, the outside world, her real home. She couldn't live like that for much longer.

A FEW DAYS LATER

It went on like that. No one knew where Rachel was. Even Kim was worried about her, he had suspected Jake from the beginning. He loved Rachel, and had lost her, but something wasn't right about it all. "Kit, what if somethings wrong?" he asked her, and Kit, for the umpteenth time that week, rolled her eyes. "Kim, I know you're worried, but..." she trailed off. What she was going to say could hurt Kim. "What?" he demanded. "Nothing, just....well, Rachel seemse to really like Jake, are you just....jealous?" she knew right away she shouldn't have said it, because Kim was off yelling about missing Rachel, just being worried, and Jake was a weird guy, couldn't be trusted. He wasn't really making sense.

Meanwhile, at the Patterson-Baker house, Ryan was almost ten. Ryan felt as though he was developing more of an interest in girls, and growing up.He had managed to get time to go on the computer, and went onto google. He typed: pornography into the search space, and millions of sites popped up. He clicked on a random one, and it came up with a page of thousands of pictures, of all different girls. "Ryan! What are you doing!?" Leah came into find Ryan on the site, outraged he would look up such a site, but stopped short when she saw who made the site, and who was in some of the photos.

Kit nursed Annabel on her knee, as Kim paced around the house. He didn't have anything to do, but couldn't sit still. Maybe Kit was right. Maybe he was just jealous. He did miss Rachel, and was sorry he's thrown her out. He stopped his thoughts when they were interrupted by Leah who came bursting through the door without knocking. "Whoah, must be urgent" Kim commented when he saw Leah. "Trust me, it is. Take a look at these." Leah thrust the print outs from the site infront of Kim.

"Oh my God!" Kit breathed when she saw the pictures. "Oh, damn, the bastard! I'll kill him!" Kim yelled. Kit and Leah tried to stop him, but he was out of the house in a flash. He ran all the way to Jake's house, with Kit and Leah behind him. Jack had saw them coming out, and didn't get a response when he asked what was wrong, and followed. They needed all the back up they could get.

Kim banged on the front door that was locked. "Maybe they're not home" Kit said hopefully, but was preparing for world war three. She still had Annabelle with her, so she'd gone a bit slower than the others. Jake poked his head out to see who was there, and saw the four, five counting Annabelle, standing there."Can I help you?" he asked, as if nothing was wrong at all.

"Yeah, actually you can!" Kim said angrily, pushing him over and stepping through the door with the others behind him. When Rachel saw Kim she ran over to him and he wrapped his arms around and held her, as she began to cry. "Get your hands off him!" Jake yelled at Rachel.

"You're a perve, you freak!" Kim yelled back at him.

"Kim, stop he has a gun..." Rachel warned quietly.

"Like hell I do." Jake said.

"You're all trespassing. If you don't leave by the time I count to three, I shoot. Someone will get hurt." He said. "No without Rachel" Kim decided, not moving an inch.

"One...." Jake began

"Jake, please stop, guys just go..." Rachel tried to start, but Kim, like always, interrupted.

"No, Rach. We're not gonna let him do this to you" Kim said.

"Two...."

"No, guys, just go, I don't want you being hurt because of me..." Rachel cried.

"THREE!" Jake screamed. He, stupidly, closed his eyes, and held down the trigger...BANG!

Who Was Shot?

What does Jake have in stored for them next?

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woohoo! Lets see, if you update tonight....I'll give you a BIG hug!!! (or you can just let me know what i can bribe you with lol!)

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Argggggggggggggh .... a cliff hanger!! Great chapter SfanS. I hope that Jack saves the day and that Annabelle is safe. Look forward to reading the next chapter sooooon.

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