Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 21, 2006 Report Posted November 21, 2006 They are watching it with horryfying faces and Drew is eating popcorn in a happy way but the rest look disgusted and Leah is hugging Dan and Peter is about to Hug Andrea but they move back awkwardly and she sits Calmly by him (They are watching the ending and Drew looks at them laughing ) Andrea(Calm Voice)-Drew the movie is good but you got to admit it is gross Drew-Its one of the best movies ever and my Top 10 collection of Oscar winning movies Leah-Honestly Drew we have seen these loads of ti,es , don't u think we could've see somthing more lighthearted Dan-Yeah i agree with Leah like we couldve watched the Blues Brothers or Somthing like Kath and Kim (They are all saying it in terrified voices) Drew(In an excited and vibrant Voice)-Calm on Guys you got to admit the movie may scare the hell out of you guys but it certainly was the highlight of the night for me ecspecially the bit when the Devil creeps inside of her Peter(Beaming but in a sacrcastic Voice)-Well my son i think it was worth watching but i hated all the screaming that little girl was screaching and that Devil making that croaky voice Andrea-Peter it wasn't that bad and yeah i did like it Drew despite evreything that Peter said , thaks for showing it Drew-Anything for you my lady(They all get up and Drew goes towards Andrea and Kisses her hand and Peter smilesand Drew smiles ijn a naughty way and Andrea smiles sweetly) Drew-Dont worry Dad don't get jealous Peter-As if she is ever going to be with you and ill make sure i get the girl Leah-Drew has a habit of messing with Older Women (They all laugh) Dan-Yes He learnt that from Peter ecspecially looking at pictures of Bo Derek from 10 Andrea(Sassy Voice)-interesting Peter , i never knew u liked her Peter-Well im over that know and i have stopped looking at them because Aussie beaties rule , even though i do still look them now and then , but not too much Andrea-Well Thanks for the Dinner evreybody and im hoping to come back again , thanks a lot Leah-Its a pleasure and Peter is so lucky to have such a beatiful women whic hopefully he is not going to take for granted Dan-And if he does we all will kick his butt together and throw him in the mud Drew-Yes me too included in doing that (They all laugh and Andrea says bye to evreybody and first hus Leah , then shakes Dans hand and Drew hugs her and kisses her cheek and Peter taps his head and Andrea goes by the door and says bye one more time and Peter goes with her with keys in his hands and they all say Bye in a cheerful voice) Leah-Wow she is a stunning Lady but im wondering what these two are going to do together Dan-Proberly playing twister and fall on top of each other like Love Young Dream Drew-Or do it behind the bushes with thorns(They all Laugh and all go to to their room directions with Drew sitting down on the sofa saying "Dad and Andrea you two are going to be busted soon , ill catch you two at it sooner or Later , but nice couple by the way,"(He has beer can in his hand and takes off the can and sips with a huge grin on his face) Last Part of this Coming soon , Not the end of the end of the story, Next Chapter Peter and Andrea get really passionate with their feelings
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 21, 2006 Report Posted November 21, 2006 Part 3 will come tomorrow hopefully
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 21, 2006 Report Posted November 21, 2006 Peter and Andrea finally come to Andreas Large house in woodland street and Andrea is stitting in the back in right hand side and Peter looks at her eyes in the mirror as Andrea is stroking her hair smiling and she spots Peter looking at her as well and she looks down with a nervous smile .(Car is a blue Vauxall Corsea) Andrea-Your Family really are great and your Son is gorgeous , well he is better looking and i tend to go for rebellious kinds Peter-Thanks a lot, well if you have someone like my son , he messes up his bedroom , plays his guiter mostly loud at night , annoys the hell out of you , thats the type you are looking for ? Andrea(Stroking her kneck and taking off her leather jacket in a flirty way)-Well not really , i go for a man with a deep and slow voice , blond curly hair , and with manners of a gentleman despite being outragously funny and can be lumbering in certain situations(They both laugh) Peter-Yes true but i'm glad we are finally alone away frommy comedic family Andrea-Peter what are you talking about ?(Says in a unsure and anxious voice) Peter-Youll see what i mean Andrea darling , this night its my turn to show you what im talking about(He takes of his seat belt and gets out of the car and Andrea looks suprised and goes around the car and opens the door in the right hand side of the back row and sits by her and looks at her intensly with Andrea turning her face towards him looking at him pentratingly and sits closer to her) Andrea-Peter why are you sitting at the back(Peter says shhh and puts his middle finger in his mouth with Andrea looking at him deeply and both know that they cant deny their attraction any longer they both start to kiss passonatly and Andrea starts to unbutton his shirt and takes it off and Peter pushes her on the seat and both are contuning it , its like the scene from Alot like Love , the car scene with Ashton Kutcher and Amanda Peet)
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 22, 2006 Report Posted November 22, 2006 The next chapter is coming soon
*belle* Posted November 22, 2006 Report Posted November 22, 2006 I love this fic Lakshya-KTrocks, can't wait for the next update to come so I can see what happens!
swfc Posted November 23, 2006 Report Posted November 23, 2006 Wow, 2 great chapters. Loving it. Please update soon.
Marianne°° Posted November 23, 2006 Report Posted November 23, 2006 Great fic Lakshya-KTrocks! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 23, 2006 Report Posted November 23, 2006 Half and Hour Later They are still in the car and Andrea puts her jacket on and Peter uts his shirt on doing his buttons and Peter smiles at her and she smiles to him and waves her finger indicating no more with a big smile and Peter has a pretend sad face. Peter-Cant we do it a bit more because they wouldnt mind if i stayed here a bit longer Andrea(Having a grin still on her face and sitting down looking at Peter)-No because we both have done enough for today and you have to go to bed because we both have work to do tomorrow Peter-The reason why i want to do it again because i cant stop feeling your sweet smelled lips and i must say u look very appealing today , stunning more is the word(He tries to Kiss her but she moves her face away shyfully) Peter-Come on Just one more and i promise i'll go away because i really enjoyed tonight Andrea-But we did it too much and i think Mr baker you've had alot today and people at home would be wondering where you are(Peter laughs gently and looks at her intensly) Peter-Can you really resist me when you look at these eyes showing passion only for you Andrea(Looking at him deeply but laughs afterwards)-Stop it your making me embarassed . Peter(Smiles )-What i was just testing you to see if you are thirsty for more Andrea(Laughing)-Peter i gotta go , wake up early for the Salon , i need to rest Peter-Whats the hurry hun and by the way i cant stop getting close to you because of that Perfume you got on Andrea-Its called Poison by Chrstian Dior , and ok ill give you one more and thats sit(She looks at him instensly and kisses him on the lips sensously and opens the door but Peter grabs her right hand and he smiles while holding it and she blushes while her face is turned and smiles softly and strokes her hair) Andrea-Peter let me go!(With a smile creeping on her gorgeous face) Peter-Why? no matter how hard u try , you cant keep away from that much longer Andrea-Peter im being Serious (Peter lets go of it and she goes towards the path to her house and looks back at Peter and takes off a bit of her jacket showing her smooth shoulders and smiles saying Bye and Peter smiles looking satisfied and Andrea has one look at him and finally goes in to her house and Peter says Yes in excitement )
carmelle Posted November 23, 2006 Report Posted November 23, 2006 The "meet the family" scene was funny. This story is comming along very well and im looking forward to reading more! Applauds the writer
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