Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 13, 2006 Report Posted November 13, 2006 Thank you very much , glad u enjoyed it, but where are the other two , page 8 is the latest update.
swfc Posted November 13, 2006 Report Posted November 13, 2006 Lol, I practically pictured that entire chapter in my head whilst reading. Update soon.
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 14, 2006 Report Posted November 14, 2006 Thanks for liking it , i'll update more soon.Where is my other fellow reader!
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 15, 2006 Report Posted November 15, 2006 Beyonce -Deja vu playing in the Background - Peter is in the shower (The show has a white curtain and blue stone walls)and he is washing his hair smoothly and his body slowly smiling as he has flashbacks of Andrea. .Andrea is in her stylish creamy bedroom in her white beatiful bed wearing a velvet knight dress lying in her bed day dreaming about Peter and she looks on the left hand side of her room and Peter is sitting kneeling down on the floor smiling ar her wearing a black leather shirt and black trousers with jis hands on his chin and Andrea looks pleased but she tries to touch him but knowing it was all all a dream she touches the pillow instead but blushes and smiles and puts a cover on her head.Peter is standing in front his square shaped mirror shaving carefully with his red handle blade and imagines Andrea wearing her velvet knightie feeling his chin by her right hand and she tries to go by he holds her right harm and pulls her towards him and he strokes her face gently and and they begin to kiss but Peter stares at the mirror while shaving but accidenly scrapes his face a bit and says ouch!! in a slow but painful way. He is the front room with a towel around his waist iron his blue shirt with 5 buttons and Dan comes in wearing a brown jumper and blue denim jeans(From Levi) comines in smiling at Peter , Peter looks at him and looks at him with a smirk. Dan-I noticed in a few days that you hve your shirt off , i cant blame you if its hot but i guess what you have been fantasizing latelly is hot. Peter-Well no , i just had a bath and ironing my shirt , nothing strange about that Dan-Well youve been doing it more often , and i think i know why , you had dreams of you and Andrea Peter-And why would you think that my kid Brother because i have my shirt off looking like Brad Pitt in Thelma Louise. Dan-Well i im not a physcic but i have a good idea that you have a fantasy that Andra is touching you looking like that , its the impression i get my brother Peter(Blushing and throwing one of his shirts on Dan)-You filthy guy(Dan runs off grinningwith Peter smiling) Leah and Drew come in by the door and lauh as they see Peter with his shirt off wearibg a towel as he is whistling Beyonce Deja Vu , Leah is wearing a black skirt and Creamy h&m jumper , Drew wearing leather jeans and a trendy t-hirt from Tommy hilfiger come over to Peter) Drew-Dan told us you have a secret fantasy that you would like to share Leah-You and Andrea are getting to know each other well , but i have a feeling that you cant wait to get your hands on each others pockets Peter-My lovely son and my pretty sister in law , i wouldnt have dreamt to think me and Andrea are doing such a thing like the scenes from Dirty Dancing . Drew-Its obvous that you have been thinking that you and Andrea are doing it in private so none of us would notice , dont hide it from us Dad because we know you are going to be h&a hottest couple Peter-I cat believe it , my son talking like that , you better keep your biology tatics to yourself(Peter smiles and looks embarrased at the same time as he is ironing his second shirt) Leah-We just thought you could invite her in her house tonight at 7pm Peter(Looking agitated)-No im not going through that Dinner process again . Drew-No Aunt Leah is saying you to watch DVds , have a chat with her , you know fun stuff , she can have her dinner before coming . Peter-Ill call her , but in this night no embarrasing stories when i saved the bay , i dont want you to bore her Leah-Im sure she wont be , because she would love to know your heroic Acts Drew(In a giry voice)-Ow Peter yo are such a hero , i want to kiss you Peter(beaming and blushing at the same time)-Thats it enough you too(Dan and Leah go leaving Peter beaming saying "Idiots") Im improving a lot in my writing .
swfc Posted November 15, 2006 Report Posted November 15, 2006 Aw, that's just adorable. I loved the day dreaming parts. Nicely done. Pete cut himself shaving was a real crack up. Loved it heaps.
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 15, 2006 Report Posted November 15, 2006 Thank You ill post more updates soon.
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted November 15, 2006 Report Posted November 15, 2006 My other reader is missing these days !
carmelle Posted November 15, 2006 Report Posted November 15, 2006 First time ive been back on this site in ages and the first fan fic i've read in a long time. It's absolutely brilliant to say the least Very funny and sweet in many ways! Looking forward to read more. It's great to see a side of Peter that we so far haven't had the chance to see. Keep up the amazing work and Well done.
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