Growing Closer (by Jacksthehottest) - comments

[xsianx]

Love the drama! and yeah you should pst your fic because your writing is amazing so I'm sure that fic will be too

Poor Martha.

[Tasha]

*cries* Please dont hurt Jack. He has so much to live for. He has Martha back. Im so sad now But great chapter. Tony and Lucas are awesome. Poor Martha

Please update soon

[Clair 247]

Fantastic stuff! I am on the edge of my seat! Glued to this story, it's brilliant! Can't wait to find out just what happens, please update soon!

[-Annie-]

Great work!

[Home and Away Always!!!]

Please make it end good!!

Edited September 16, 2006 by Home and Away Always!!!

[katie343]

“You two better not have called anyone to come” He said pointing his gun at Peter and then at Jack. “Or else” he added, growing more and more angrier

This is'nt looking good

Please post more soon.

[Nicom]

Uh-Oh.

End good, please end good!

[Tasha]

Jacks safe *dances* Im so happy. My day has been made, not really but yeh. Im glad his alive. And now he can run to Martha and they can kiss and make up. But im guessing at the end of the next chapter it'll be of when Jack and Martha just start to talk, so you'll make us wait another chapter for them to profess the undying love for each other. You seem to like leaving us in suspense, or with cliffhangers Great chapter though

Please update soon

[Jacksthehottest]

Jacks safe *dances* Im so happy. My day has been made, not really but yeh. Im glad his alive. And now he can run to Martha and they can kiss and make up. But im guessing at the end of the next chapter it'll be of when Jack and Martha just start to talk, so you'll make us wait another chapter for them to profess the undying love for each other. You seem to like leaving us in suspense, or with cliffhangers Great chapter though

Please update soon

nice prediction, lol,

Edited September 18, 2006 by Jacksthehottest

[Tasha]

haha...i think ive grown to understand how you write your fan fics