sevenpuddings Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 That was so sweet Jackie. I love how with it Mattie seemed when she wanted to find Henry. Sometimes, I think everyone else assumes shes so fragile, but in the end shes really the strong one... yay for twin bonding, I love those moments, but I'm glad she almost, put him in his place at the end too. He needs to know that! I can't wait for more! Quote
Jackieleanne Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Thanks Jess, I'm glad you liked the last bit I really wanted to include that because its showing that she can't just get over it so easily and that he was wrong to do with what he did and yes he needs to know that it isn't going to be easy but at the end of the day they still love each other and after losing so much they don't want to lose each other. Quote
-Annie- Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Beautiful Jackie! I think that scene fitted just right. Excellent work! Quote
tasha7905 Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Fantastic Jackie. Matilda sounded so grown up when she was talking to Henry, I guess after everything she has been through she has had to grow up quickly. Im so glad they have sorted it out. I cant wait for more. Quote
tasha7905 Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Great chapter Jackie. At least they are both working things out for Matilda's sake. Hope there is more later. Quote
Jackieleanne Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Thanks there will be don't worry im really on a roll today. I just really feel like writing hopefully more of Family life will be up aswell later. This story doesn't have long left but I do have other fic ideas in the works. Quote
sevenpuddings Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Awww male bonding all round. That was great Jackie. I'm glad that Luke was still angry, because he had every right to be, just I just hope that they can move past this, and look towards the future. Can't wait for more (so happy your on the writing spree!) Quote
Jackieleanne Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Thanks Jess im glad you are enjoying my writing spree as much as I am. I was planning on going shopping today but I am so into my writing that I am actually putting the shopping off which is quite something for me to not want to go shopping. Quote
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 6, 2006 Author Report Posted September 6, 2006 Thats great Jackie! I'm glad I'm not the only one who has the writing bug today, I'm writing LOTS of Love Bites at the moment! Quote
Jackieleanne Posted September 6, 2006 Report Posted September 6, 2006 Thanks Penny and that sounds good I can't wait to see what happens in love bites. The writing bug is great. Quote
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