Daddy's Kisses (by Clair 247) - comments

[xsianx]

omg! that was soo beautifully written!

Poor Martha would hate to leave my family.....

I forgive you as you wrote it beautifully

Update when you can.

[xGlowingAngelx]

oh....my...god! That was a shock if ever I've had one. I totally did not expect that, I mean, I'm just sat here all happy and smiley thinking they'd be living a great life, and then you tell me she's dead! WHAT?! Poor Jack Jack without Martha is like.... Ant without Dec....Cheese without Crackers. awww! I want to hug him. Look...Look at what you've done to me. *Gives evil glare* lol. Update soon.

[shawtyy]

That was beautifully written! I still can't believe Martha is dead. Update soon.

[puja]

Awwww, that was so beautifully written, I had a tear in my eye.

Bless Jack, it must be so hard taking care of his young family without his beloved Martha *sighs*

I really want to know where you will take it from here...it's so good! Please update soon.

[-Annie-]

That was lovely. Oh well, the writing was lovely, the story was sad!

Don't apologise! Shocks and twists in a story, always make it more interesting.

[caitrules]

i cant believe you killed Martha. My jaw dropped and my chewing gum fell out Nice twist though

[amz89]

Its so beautifully written. Poor Martha but now I know why it's called Daddy's Kisses

[Home and Away Always!!!]

OMG!!!! THIS IS SO AWFUL!! Not your writing, becasue it is brilliant, don't take offence at that, but YOU KILLED MARTHA!!! MY HEART IS BREAKING!!!!

[Tasha]

OMG im going to cry *cries* Poor Martha. Poor Jack, Matt and Mia Great chapter. But how could it be a Jack and Martha fan fic, without martha

Please update soon

[Jacksthehottest]

awwww that so sad i want Martha back , can't wait to see what you got planned for this fic, great writing, please update soon