loobieloo Posted September 12, 2006 Report Posted September 12, 2006 Ok I was allready crying tonight but now I'm literally unconsolable. My mums shouting into my room to me to ask if im ok This is one of the deepest and well writen J+M stories I have read so well done I ts so sad the way Martha knew Jack so well, she knew he would go looking into the kid's chests Ok I'm crying writing this lol hehe I need to stop, I meen its only a story. Then again its a very very very sad story so I can cry abit longer Crying is good for you, after you cry you allwways feel better Cant wait for more update soon please. Quote
andiyt Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Aww Poor Jack! Its so sweet that Martha knew what Jack would look into the kids'boxes! This is so great! beautifully written as usual! I love it! Thanks for updating so kwik! Quote
Tasha Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 *cries uncontrolably* that was so sad. Such amazing writing. Must be just as hard fro you to write this then it is for us to read it. Im sad now, i dont need to be sad, i need energy to do my assignment, but all my sadness has drainined it all out of me But please do continue Quote
-Annie- Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 (edited) Far out...I have tears in my eyes! This never...I repeat NEVER happens to me...woah! You're one hell of a writer Clair! Edited September 13, 2006 by xAnniex Quote
mrsbrody Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 This is so sad I've never cried in a fic before but this is the first one. That was so sweet of Martha to do that she knows him so well. Excellent writing. Quote
Jackieleanne Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Just caught up this is brilliantly written you are a great writter you capture the emotion perfectly I was moved to tears. Can't wait to read more. Quote
puja Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 Just caught up with the last three chapters or so and they were so emotional and touching I wanted to read over them for a second time but knew I would be blubbering like a baby! This fic has been fantastically written throughout. Please update. Quote
andiyt Posted September 14, 2006 Report Posted September 14, 2006 I have been checking back so many times Im so Anxious! Please update soon!!I just love this! Maybe when i finish my last exam, it'll be up! Fingers crossed! Keep up the great work!!! Quote
puja Posted September 14, 2006 Report Posted September 14, 2006 I know this is like repitition but so beautiful! Quote
xsianx Posted September 14, 2006 Report Posted September 14, 2006 Aww! can I say anymore?.. no Aww! Your really good at explaining what someone who has loft their partner is feeling. Well done. Quote
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