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  Clair 247 said:
. Jack just couldn’t bear to say those vows to anyone else but Martha.

That is just the most perfect line ever. :wub:

It's a shame things didn't work out with Fitzy, but I guess that's just the way it goes. 50 years is a high leap though, makes me wonder what happened in all the years before then. :unsure:

Anyways, looking forwards to reading more. :)

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I am always thrilled to see another update on the chapter! :)

Time does fly!Its great that Jack is a great grand-dad soon, and all the kids have grown up!

You can really picture it, but Jack being 7oish?Ummm... :huh:

ANother great chapter!keep it up!

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Beautiful, just beautiful. Need I say more? Your an amazing writer, and this has to be the most touching fic I've ever read. Does it mean Jack's about to pass that he can hear Martha's voice? That sometimes happens, hehe. I won't be too sad if Jack dies, I mean, he'll finally be with the woman of his dreams again, and they can watch over their children and grandchildren together, and great-grandchildren.

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Awwww...you were on a role with happy chapters, then you made a sad, yet wonderfully beautiful chapter. That last paragraph was beautiful. Jack and Marthas love was so strong that he still remembers her 50 years on :) Lovely.

Please update soon :D

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