mrsbrody Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 That was wonderful I'd never thought I'd say that I want jack to die but I die he's where he belongs now that was so well written. I like the name Emily Martha but that probebly a bit bias seeing my name's Emily he he. Quote
Tasha Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 I knew you were going to kill Jack. But im so happy that his with Martha now. Great chapter. It was sad, but lovely. Please update soon Quote
Tasha Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 AWww...that was beautiful. Please update soon Quote
andiyt Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 ANother beauty!Great as always! Cant beleive its gonna finish soon:( Quote
xsianx Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 Beautiful! Incredible! Fanastic! Superb! Amazing! Perfect! Great! - I can't think of any other good words to describe this chapter, like the rest of your fic. I don't want it to end You must write another one lol Quote
amz89 Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 Just read the last three chapters!! Lovely written, so is Jack dead?? What ever happened to him & Lara?? Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted September 21, 2006 Report Posted September 21, 2006 wow i just caught up aagin, loved it even though Jack died, but that was excellent, it is so discriptive Please update soon Quote
-Annie- Posted September 22, 2006 Report Posted September 22, 2006 (edited) Lovely writing. More soon! Edited September 22, 2006 by -Annie- Quote
beckyboo Posted September 22, 2006 Report Posted September 22, 2006 ‘She said she was a Martha, Mummy, you know like I’m a Jack? She’s just Martha’. Omg that was a really good ending!!!!!!!!11 it was fabby Jack and Martha lol!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxx Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted September 22, 2006 Report Posted September 22, 2006 Clair 247 said: ‘She said she was a Martha, Mummy, you know like I’m a Jack? She’s just Martha’. OMG, Today is not a good day. All I seem to be doing is crying. And I'm crying for reasons you shouldn't. That line did not help. It was the most perfect line ever to end on the story on. Although I'd like to see a spin off the little Jack and Martha. lol. (Not that I'm hinting ) lol! Thank you for giving me such an emtionally, enjoable read. I hope to read more from you soon. Like a sequal Quote
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