Daddy's Kisses (by Clair 247) - comments

[puja]

Brilliant second chapter!

Please update soon.

[-Annie-]

Wow! I'm scared now!

Beautiful chapter, the writing is really good. The descriptive phrases are working well to set the atmosphere. Keep up the nice work.

[Jackieleanne]

Awww they had a girl. Jack is the perfect husband. Can't wait to read more this is really well written.

[Jack and Martha 4eva]

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Awww they had a girl. Jack is the perfect husband. Can't wait to read more this is really well written.

I agree with you 100%

Jack such a caring husband. He really would do anything for Martha. Hmmmm I wonder what they're going to call their little baby. Great writing.

Please, please update ASAP

Em

[xGlowingAngelx]

awww awww awww A beautiful baby girl. And if her parents looks are anything to go by, she's going to be a cutie. awww, I'm happy. Jack was just the seewtest.

[beckyboo]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!

That chaper was sooo sweet!!!!

Jack can be my husband anyday !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xxxxxxxxxxx

[puja]

So, so, so, so good!!!

Jack was absolutely perfect in that last chapter and, once again, excellent writing!!

[xsianx]

Right I'm adopting

Seriously your description was GREAT!

Aww! a girl, I think the name Sians nice

please post more soon.

[-michelle-]

Brilliant. Please update soon.

[Tasha]

Awww...that chapter brought a tear to my eye. Jack is the best husband ever. Martha is so lucky. Im glad both Martha and baby Holden are alright

Please update soon