xsianx Posted August 20, 2006 Report Posted August 20, 2006 Tasha really annoyed me in that chapter Great chapter, more soon please. Quote
beckyboo Posted August 20, 2006 Report Posted August 20, 2006 Omg you have to update ASAP!!!!!! this is amazing!!!!!!!1 Well done I hope Mac's okay!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxx Quote
puja Posted August 20, 2006 Report Posted August 20, 2006 That was absolutely fantastic; gripping stuff!! Not sure what to make of this Guy...is he genuine? Is he not? Hmmmm, please don't keep us in suspense for too long Nicole. It won't take much for me to join the rest and start to annoy you! lol Quote
bay girl Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 Excellent chapter. I love Jack yelling at Tasha. Ha Ha. Hope you update really soon. Love this fic. Quote
caitrules Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 ahh the power of nagging thanks Nicole, great chapter Quote
captain_jack_sparrow Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 that was great, you've just increased my hatred for tash lol keep up the great work update soon please xx Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 (edited) Well i have two chapters to review, made for great reading. Chapter One HA! Martha called her a tart, YESSSS! She deserved that, and to be in pain, (which i just know Nicole loved writing ) What was with Jack smiling, so HE figured out HIS feelings with Martha still out there, again, how selfish!!! As for Guy, i love him on the show and i still do And Robbie telling Jack off and saying Martha's last words, LOVED that! Chapter Two Tasha's actually being a half decent freind (well trying) I didn't think it was possible! While i still want to slap Jack (really hard) I couldn't help but become momentarily distracted from the fic for a mintue and get lost in a day dream when i read this.. running his hand through his hair. Anyway, great chapter, please update soon. O and it looks like you're finally getting your own back and being annoyed yourself by Annie. Well it's about time! Edited August 21, 2006 by Jamey-Maria Quote
lollipop_lover11 Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 OMG, I just read all the story so far and it's horrible (in a good way if you know what I mean) I really hate Tasha and I liked how Martha called her a tart. I hate to say this but I also hate Jack, what was he thinking????? Why didn't he start looking sooner? Three days is a long time without a call, he is a cop and he didn't start looking until they were gone for 14 days! How stupid is that? And Tasha thinking they were friends again just because Martha didn't want her to die, talk about delusional. I also think Robbie is going to forgive Tasha which is totally wrong. She so doesn't deserve him. Lastly I would like to say Guy seems like a very suspect character who has bad intentions. Okay I think all my anger has been let out. I am sort of calm. This has been very well written Nicole, you can get so many people to hate a character that is usually liked so very well done. Quote
-Annie- Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 Finally! About time Nicole! And of course, you haven't let us down yet. I loved the chapter! Thanks for dedicating it to me. Lol. Only if you do your maths homework first, Annie. Cait! Don't go on the dark side! Don't follow the freaky Annie! Save yourself! Run, run! Come on Cait, come...come...come...come to the dark side! Mwah ha ha! O and it looks like you're finally getting your own back and being annoyed yourself by Annie. Well it's about time! ^Amen to that! Someone has got to put Nicole back in her place! Okay...now then Nicole...time to update! Lol Quote
Nicom Posted August 21, 2006 Report Posted August 21, 2006 (edited) Finally! About time Nicole! And of course, you haven't let us down yet. I loved the chapter! Thanks for dedicating it to me. Lol. Only if you do your maths homework first, Annie. Cait! Don't go on the dark side! Don't follow the freaky Annie! Save yourself! Run, run! Come on Cait, come...come...come...come to the dark side! Mwah ha ha! O and it looks like you're finally getting your own back and being annoyed yourself by Annie. Well it's about time! ^Amen to that! Someone has got to put Nicole back in her place! Okay...now then Nicole...time to update! Lol You actually think I'm going to do as you say after THAT post!? Lol. The meaning of Chapter 6 It was really Jack and Tasha making up to the audience. (You guys!) Tasha wasn't selfish. She could have got arrested for what she was doing for Martha, but didn't care. Jack was shouting at Tasha (wahay! Great fun to write! =]) and he showed that he REALLY cared about Martha. Martha's stuck about what to do. =) Edited August 21, 2006 by xxNicolexx Quote
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