xsianx Posted August 31, 2006 Report Posted August 31, 2006 (edited) Fantastic ending! I'm going to miss this fic now I loved the way you explained the way they were feeling. Well Done Nicole!! Can't wait to read you next fanfiction lol may be one about JaCorey Jack and Martha of corse. Edited August 31, 2006 by xsianx Quote
Tasha Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 Great ending. Loved it. Love the Colleen jokes. Im glad they worked everything out Quote
bay girl Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 Excellent ending. I'm so glad that they got back together. I hope to read some more new fics some day soon. Quote
dolly-999 Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 That was a heaps good ending Nicole, loved how it wasn't rushed or dragged out too long. And I loved how you still put a bit of humour in it, well done, it was a fantatic fic. Quote
-Annie- Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 *Wipes tears from eyes* That was beautiful Nicole. Just beautiful. That was a great ending....oh, I'm gonna miss this fic too! Also, I can't help but notice that Martha has been given some very 'Nicoleish' qualities, for example- “I’m rambling and getting confused…” She muttered. “My head hurts.” She groaned, holding her head. Lol! But seriously, great work Nicole. Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 oh that was great Nicole, so sweet and cute and funny,especially the jokes about Colleen. I'm glad they worked it all out, overall this fic has been excellent, i love it, i hope you write more fics soon making sure they are about J and M lol, thanx for finishing that of, excellent writing. Quote
mrsbrody Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 I loved the ending actually I loved the whole fiction it was great. Quote
Nicom Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 Thanks everyone. Can I just say, the reason why I had to re-do the end (if you can all remember those weeks back when I said that I had to) was because I broke JM up. I'd got so mad at Tasha and Jack, I broke both the couples up, and left it as Jack was moving away. lol. After some cool down time and a talk from jackandmartha!!! I decided to change it. But.. Tasha and Robbie still broke up, because I don't like Tasha. Quote
xsianx Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 (edited) Lol wise decision I don't care about Tasha and Robbie. Edited September 1, 2006 by xsianx Quote
katie343 Posted September 1, 2006 Report Posted September 1, 2006 Very sweet ending Great work. Quote
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