da_love_goddess Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 That was such a wonderfully written chapter Nicole. I can't wait for more. Quote
hotchoc Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 awwwwwww poor Jack,that was so sweet,Beth is so nice. Can't wait till next chapter! Quote
lollipop_lover11 Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 (edited) quote- As soon as Jack turned around, and slowly walked off the beach, she fell to the ground in tears. I don't know why martha should be sad she broke up with him. I know that sounds mean but it's true Edited May 28, 2006 by lollipop_lover11 Quote
Nicom Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 lollipop_lover11 said: quote- As soon as Jack turned around, and slowly walked off the beach, she fell to the ground in tears. I don't know why martha should be sad she broke up with him. I know that sounds mean but it's true Lol. Yea but she thinks he doesn't trust her, doesn't love her, and that he's a violent pig, so where's this relationship going? She thinks it has to end; mainly because that's what Callum's been telling her. She still loves him, she just knows its over between them. Quote
lollipop_lover11 Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 xxNicolexx said: lollipop_lover11 said: quote- As soon as Jack turned around, and slowly walked off the beach, she fell to the ground in tears. I don't know why martha should be sad she broke up with him. I know that sounds mean but it's true Lol. Yea but she thinks he doesn't trust her, doesn't love her, and that he's a violent pig, so where's this relationship going? She thinks it has to end; mainly because that's what Callum's been telling her. She still loves him, she just knows its over between them. true Quote
katie343 Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 whoops i did'nt check the page before yay update Quote
Sal_gurl Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 Omg i actully started to cry im loving this fan fic please post more soon Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 omg nciole that was sooo good, i feel so sorry for Jack...grrr i hate Callum Quote
bell Posted May 28, 2006 Report Posted May 28, 2006 hehehe peter is back. maybe he can knock some sence into martha and callum great chapter by the way Quote
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