SaRaH_16692_ Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! great writing. im new here and i was just going through the site when i found your fanfic and i couldn't stop reading it! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! dont leave me in suspence any longer!!!!!!!!! Quote
katie343 Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 argh how could you leave it there please update ASAP Quote
caitrules Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 this fanfic is so good Pleeeeeese update soon. You've left us all in suspense Quote
lollipop_lover11 Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 how stupid was Jack for using his 1 call to call martha and not the hospital? And how stupid was martha to not answer his call. I am very angry at both of them. Please update soon Quote
Nicom Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 awww, don't be mad at Jack. I see why he did that, (probably because I wrote it lol), but I personally believe it was because he realised that Callum, the guy who is clearly insane and tried to kill him, is going now to see Martha. He wants to warn her because he loves her. And also, I think if you got stabbed in the stomach, you'd probably assume that you're going to die. He knows that by the time an ambulance got there, he'd have bled (sp?) to death. I think he knew he was going to die, that's why he told her to send Peter, not her. So what would be the point in him using the phone to call an ambulance, which probably won't help him, when he could save Martha? And then I totally contradict myself when he goes looking for a phone to call an ambulance.. lol. I think he's in denial then. lol "I'm not going to die.. ahhh" Quote
katie343 Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 ahem enough talk of dying is there more coming soon? hint hint and no more death talk it's to sad*cries* Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 plz update soon can't wait to see what happens Quote
bell Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 oooooh aaaaah - its gripping, i love it but nicole why did you have to end it there? oh dear another cliff hanger - i know you dont like them so why do you make us suffer? i think i might go and cry. Jack please live Martha Run, run, run like ze wind (and get away from callam and do on him that move jack taught him cause then hed be proud of you) Quote
-michelle- Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 Another great chapter. Cant wait for more. Please update soon!! Quote
xsianx Posted June 4, 2006 Report Posted June 4, 2006 Great chapter. Finalllllllllllllllly Martha is seeing sense( about time tho:P) Hope Jack is ok:) xx Quote
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