Jealous Eyes (by Nicom) - comments

[bay girl]

I'm slowly starting to feel sorry for Martha. She still has some major sucking up to do on my part.

Poor Jack. My baby. Atleast he's alive. Callum will die for hurting him.

[hotchoc]

Why the hell is Martha hanging around callum??? Did I misss something? Because last timme she was being forced into callums boot and he drove off.....I would've though martha would get away from callum ASAP..???

Anyways great chapter,please update soon:D

[SaRaH_16692_]

Yet another great chapter. Thank god that Jack is O.K, i also hope Martha escapes from Callum. PLEASE update soon!!

[-lolly-]

Aww the Holden families soo cute!! Im soo glad Jacks woken up!! I am really starting to feel sorry for Martha i hope she can escape and find her way back to Jack... Great story please update again soon!!

[Jamey-Maria]

Awww those boys are soo cute! I love it when you write scenes like that Nicole! O.k so i am now slightly feeling sympathetic towards Martha but she still to suffer a bit more........(just a bit). Callum is really starting to freak me out now, i mean he did before but now..............WHOA! Jack is o.k, thank God! Please update soon.

[katie343]

can't wait for more

[lollipop_lover11]

hello martha

why don't you try and escape.

Callum won't hurt you because he loves you.

So get out of there and go and see Jack.

[Jacksthehottest]

yeay:) thanx for updating, the Holden family are so cute. I wish Martha was there:(....hopefully she finds a way to escape and someone needs to kill Callum, lol great chapter can't wait for more

[linzie_mac01]

Another fantastic chapter!!

Glad Jacky boy finally woke up, even i was starting to wonder whether you had changed your mind and decided to kill him off

But yay great 'manly' scene between the Holden boys lol

But I wish Martha would do a runner

[-michelle-]

Great chapter, so glad jacks woke up. Please update soon!