bell Posted June 10, 2006 Report Posted June 10, 2006 fantastique, jack is going to save martha (again?) Quote
lollipop_lover11 Posted June 11, 2006 Report Posted June 11, 2006 Why is it always Jack saving Martha? Maybe she should save him for once. Great chapter Please update soon Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted June 11, 2006 Report Posted June 11, 2006 (edited) wow omg speechless....that was sooo good Nicole, omg hope Jack saves her.....god i hate callum hope he dies or gets locked up in jail so Martha and Jack can be together....can't wait for more this is soo good plz update soon Edited June 11, 2006 by Jacksthehottest Quote
-lolly- Posted June 11, 2006 Report Posted June 11, 2006 WOW that was sooo good! Loved all the flashbacks i could like picture it all happening in my head... I hope the police can find her.. Cant wait to read more.. Quote
bell Posted June 11, 2006 Report Posted June 11, 2006 wow its so good. just one question, so Jack isnt actually in a coma? please update soon. Quote
Nicom Posted June 11, 2006 Report Posted June 11, 2006 (edited) bell said: wow its so good. just one question, so Jack isnt actually in a coma? please update soon. No, he isn't. He woke up last chapter. But Callum and Martha don't know that. The hospital records just haven't been updated that's all. Sorry for the confusion, I was meant to put something in about that.. Oh well! Edited June 11, 2006 by xxNicolexx Quote
bell Posted June 11, 2006 Report Posted June 11, 2006 well cause i was the only one who asked it was probably clear but being blonde quite often dont pick up on things/ and am easily confuseed. anyway thanks for explaining it to me. YAY he wolk up please update soon Quote
linzie_mac01 Posted June 11, 2006 Report Posted June 11, 2006 Thanks for the updates, have onyl just been free to read them and they were great! I have been waiting all weekend to get a chance to read them damn it, but then i find two chapters and its all worth the wait! Loved the different writing styles, flashbacks were a good reminder of the guilt Martha is feeling; I could feel it too and I actually feel sorry for her! She couldn't help being so naive. And Jack is still concerned for her, even though he must remember all the awful things she said to him and the fact that she rejected his last call. (*sigh*) Go on Jacky baby, you go and bring back your precious Martha!! Quote
Nicom Posted June 11, 2006 Report Posted June 11, 2006 Well, that chapter was mainly to show Martha's guilt, and HOPEFULLY make her more appealing to people.. maybe you can all forgive her a little? If not.. I've still got time. lol. Quote
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