Jealous Eyes (by Nicom) - comments

[dolly-999]

OMG, I though she was finally going to be safe, and then you had to make Callum come back, why?

anyway despite Martha getting herself back into trouble, it was excellent, well done.

[xGlowingAngelx]

Oh......My.......God. I'm literally frozen in shock. Why didn't she get in the bush when he told her too!! Silly woman, and now she's possibly in more danger!! And you shouted at me for my putting them in danger *Huff* lol. I won't listen to you again lol. Anyway please update soon

[katie343]

Grrr Callum is so annoyingly evil please update soon

[Jacksthehottest]

wow that was like a really good chapter omg i seriouslt thought Marth was going to be safe, why didn't she just hide when Jack told her too...omg, hopefully Jack finds her soon, plz don't leave us waiting around too log, plz update soon i can't wait to read more

[SaRaH_16692_]

Please Please let Martha be O.K i feel so sorry for her and Jack. they were so happy martha was coming home but then callum came on the phone. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

[-lolly-]

I hope Marthas going to be ok!! Way to leave us in suspense Please update soon!!

[-michelle-]

Great chapter. Please update soon

[hotchoc]

OMG!! I really thought martha was gonna be okay....but then I knew you wouldn't be that nice and would leave us in suspense Anywayz that was a great chapter,please update soon

[linzie_mac01]

OMG Marthaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

Come on Jack don't just stand there with your mouth gaping, DO SOMETHING!!!!!!

Great last couple of chapters

[bay girl]

Honestly........sometimes Martha can be such a blonde. LOL. Sorry no offence to blondes. But she should have hid in the bushes.