xsianx Posted December 1, 2006 Report Posted December 1, 2006 Sian thinks that was avery good chapter! and now wants to swim in the sea with a fit guy... oh I know Jack lol Yeah! Martha why do you keep doing this to us ?!? Great writing, more soon.
>>Emma<< Posted December 1, 2006 Report Posted December 1, 2006 Great update, grrr, Martha and Jack, please update soon
MarthaJackFan Posted December 2, 2006 Report Posted December 2, 2006 Omg im loving this fan fic! Well i love any story about Martha & Jack...lol Keep up the good work:)
katie343 Posted December 2, 2006 Report Posted December 2, 2006 Why is Martha being so evil? Please continue this fic.
~Rosey~ Posted December 4, 2006 Report Posted December 4, 2006 Sian thinks that was avery good chapter! and now wants to swim in the sea with a fit guy... oh I know Jack lol Yeah! Martha why do you keep doing this to us ?!? Great writing, more soon. Sian, you make me laugh.
[.jessa-belle.] Posted December 4, 2006 Report Posted December 4, 2006 YAY An Update Is Martha stuffed up in the head? Because she knows she loves him but she still won't get back together with him She has to run after him, and then say she didn't mean it. Then Kiss him. I hope he runs to the cliffs and she finds him there Awesome Update JTH Update Soon Please!!!!
Jacksthehottest Posted December 6, 2006 Report Posted December 6, 2006 Sorry for the lack of updates here's the new chapter Chapter 9: Martha was walking along the beach, her hair blowing all over her face, taking a walk was supposed to clear her head from everything, but it wasn’t working she couldn’t stop thinking about him. She had felt guilty, she could tell yesterday that she had hurt him, the worst part was that she kept doing it. Jack had done nothing to her in the past 5months. He had only shown her how much he loved her. She was never going to find a guy who made her feel the way he did, he could make her smile even when she thought it was impossible and she could see that he really did love her, why couldn’t she show him that in return When she was with Jack, it was the happiest time of her life, she remembered every morning where she would wake up next to him, lucky to have him. A lot had changed since then, but the feelings hadn’t He would make her happy, so why wouldn’t she take him back, she didn’t know what to do, could she just forget what he did. She was the only thing stopping them from getting back. He could make her happy so why would she deny it. Over the past months, he hadn’t done anything that hurt her, but he was always there for her when she needed him, maybe he was different. She hadn’t spoken to him since yesterday, she didn’t know what to say, whether to apologize or to forget all about it. She had even thought about moving on, but after a couple of minutes she had realized that was impossible she couldn’t do it, loving someone besides Jack was wrong, it didn’t feel right. She wanted to give him some time before she was to go and see him again, she was confused. If she did feel bad after yesterday maybe she did love him. Yesterday it had felt like they were back together, but she had ruined it at the end. She placed herself down onto the sand. Maybe she would give him another shot, after all it was 5months ago, maybe he had changed and maybe she was over it. All she could think about was being with him now, the past didn’t seem to be important. “Martha” Ric called again, but no answer, she was obviously thinking about something .He and Lucas walked up to her, grabbing her attention. “Hey” Lucas said once he reached her. “Hey” Martha replied to both of them. She wasn’t up for having conversation with anyone right now, she had more important things to deal with. “What are you doing here, all by yourself” Ric joked, but he got no smile in response from Martha. “I don’t know” she replied not even bothering to look at him. “Is everything ok?” Ric tried again. “Yeah why wouldn’t it be” she snapped back, but suddenly regretting it, she was taking out her anger on Ric and he didn’t deserve it. “I was just asking” Ric replied back. “I know, I’m sorry, I’m just tired, I didn’t get much sleep last night” Martha apologized, she couldn’t tell Ric what was going on right now, she didn’t feel like talking about it. Ric looked right back at her. “I’m fine” Martha reassured him, forcing a smile. “Maybe you might have some kind of idea what is wrong with my brother” Lucas asked Martha, he had been to Jack’s this morning and he had seemed annoyed, he didn’t want to talk to anyone. Martha all of a sudden looked away from Lucas, she knew what was wrong with Jack, he was hurting because of her. “Nope no idea” Martha told him quickly. She could see that Ric’s eyes were focused on her but she ignored it. “He’s acting weird and angry for some reason” Lucas told her. “Have you spoken to him lately, has he said anything to you?” Lucas added. “Nope” Martha replied, she must have been a bitch to him yesterday to make him feel the way he was now, Jack wouldn’t even want to talk to her now, she probably guessed he wouldn’t want her anymore, why would he want to be with someone that rejected him all the time, when all he did was be nice. Martha stood up, the only way she was going to sort this out was if she was to talk to Jack. “I have to go” Martha said quickly grabbing her stuff and walking of. Lucas and Ric both looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders. They had no idea what was going on. *** She stood in front of his door, unsure why she had arrived here, all she knew was they needed to sort things out ad she needed to apologize, it was the only way she was going to forget about what had happened. She had no idea how he was going to react. Martha knocked on the door, waiting for an answer. “Coming” Jack replied, from the other side of the door. Martha all of a sudden felt nervous, what was she supposed to say. Jack opened the door expecting it to be Dad wanting to know what it was, or maybe even Lucas coming back to see what was wrong, but to his surprise it was Martha. They both stood their looking at each other, Jack wasn’t in the mood for her now, he didn’t know what to feel for her anymore. He knew that she liked him and he liked her, he didn’t see what was the problem of getting back together. What had happened 5months ago was in the past, he wished Martha could see that. “Hey” Martha said, smiling at him. Jack didn’t reply, he just kept looking at her. “I’m kind of busy now” he finally responded, it was the only way he was going to get out of this conversation. Martha knew what Jack wanted, he wanted her to leave, but that wasn’t going to happen, she wasn’t going to leave until she had told him what she came here to do. “It will only take a couple of minutes” Martha tried once again. “Can you not please Martha?” Jack begged her, he was finding it hard to stay angry at her. “Can’t this just wait” he added. Martha pushed straight passed him walking into the house. She could see the beer on the table and the TV was turned on. She turned back at Jack. “So what exactly are you busy with?” she asked him, she wasn’t going to give up, Jack may not want her here, but he couldn’t ignore her for much longer. “Stuff” Jack replied back why couldn’t she just make it easy for both of them and leave, she had made it pretty obvious to him yesterday that she didn’t want him and that she just wanted to keep denying what she felt for him and he was sick of it. “Jack?” Martha tried again. “Can we talk?” she asked him “I don’t have time for this right now” he replied back stubbornly. She moved closer to him, grabbing his arm She waited until his eyes met with hers. “Please?” she asked, she could see how much she had hurt him, he was willing to even ignore her. Jack looked back at Martha, he couldn’t let her go so easily, he wished he could just get over her but it wasn’t that easy, before Martha had turned up to his place, he was angry at her, but now he wasn’t so sure, how did she manage to do this to him.
gawguss_tiff Posted December 6, 2006 Report Posted December 6, 2006 OMG you still have told us what he did i think i know im pretty sure but omg just tel us lol GREAT CHAPTER maybe we could get another chapter really soon telling us what he did!!!!! lol well update ASAP lol I love this fic xoxo
[.jessa-belle.] Posted December 6, 2006 Report Posted December 6, 2006 How can yo leave it there Jel! How can you Please Pleas Please Tell us what he did in the next chapter!!! I will die if you don't *literally* Lol. Please Update Soon Please.....
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