puja Posted March 31, 2007 Report Posted March 31, 2007 Martha should have gone camping. At least that way she could have kept an eye on Miss Ashley and, if she made a move on Jack, Martha could get payback. A drunk Martha could get payback Yes, I like that idea a lot Great writing JTH, can't wait for more!
linzie_mac01 Posted April 7, 2007 Report Posted April 7, 2007 Puja i completely agree with you! Drunken payback is just what Martha needs to do lol Ooh, i've just thought, what if Martha becomes all detective and stalker-esque and follows them all camping so that she can spy on them, he he he that would be great...and a little scary, god i'm freaking myself out lol
-Jade- Posted April 9, 2007 Report Posted April 9, 2007 Drunken Martha sounds good to me. Why does Martah have to be so stubborn? Why does Ashley have to go? Really great writing - you know I love this fic. Please update when you can.
Jacksthehottest Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 Here’s the next chapter Chapter 21: Day Later Martha had just woken up and gone for a swim, she had felt so much better after everything she had thought about the previous night. She had considered every possible thing that could happen while she wasn’t with them. It was doing her head in. When she closed her eyes, she could imagine Ashley being all over Jack and the worst part was that she also imagined him smiling at her as well. She couldn’t think of that now, if Jack was going to move on and leave the past behind, then that’s what was going to happen. Martha knew they couldn’t keep going on remembering the past it would just tear them apart even more. As she was walking back home she could see Tash and Robbie getting out of the car. She smiled to herself they were back, maybe now it would stop her from thinking so much about it. She walked towards them only to see Ashley step out of the car wearing Jack’s jacket. Martha stopped herself before she got any closer. This did not fix anything. She couldn’t help but feel angry, she didn’t want to be jealous, but she couldn’t help but think what happened between them. Did this mean Jack didn’t love her anymore, did it mean that him and Ashley were together right now?. She tried to push the possibilities out of her head. But it only got worse as her eyes met with Jack’s. “Martha Hey” Tash said running up to her and giving her a hug. Martha smiled back at her, it was good to see at least someone cared about her. “Hey, how was it?” Martha asked. “It was alright, would have been better if you’d came” Tash told her. “Hmm” Martha smiled. “I’m going to head home and get changed, I’ll catch up with you later” she told her before walking of. She saw as Jack waved to her but she ignored him, she turned to look at him not even bothering to smile, she just walked straight past him *** Martha had just gotten out of the shower and fell onto the couch. She was getting more and more angry by the minute, she knew she shouldn’t, she was the one that let Jack go, she broke up with him, he was allowed to move on. But she didn’t get why he would want to with Ashley, she was the one that ruined everything for them. Jack always told her how many times he hated what happened and how he regretted it, why was he being friendly to her why was he even around her then. She just didn’t understand. The knock on the door caught her attention. “Come in” she yelled out not even bothering to turn around, she couldn’t care less who was at the door. “Hey” Jack said as he came from behind her and leaned on the couch looking at Martha. Martha couldn’t believe he had actually come to see her. “How are you?” Jack asked, knowing she wasn’t going to speak. He wondered what was going on down their earlier, she was mad at him and he didn’t understand why. “Just fine” she told him bluntly. “What are you doing here?” she wanted to know. “Just came to see how you were” he told her. “Well I’m fine I don’t need daily check ups from you” she snapped back at him. “Ok calm down” Jack said as he came over to her side and sat down, he didn’t get the way Martha worked, one day she was trying to be nice to him and the other she was snapping at him. “What did I do?’ Jack wanted to know, he actually didn’t know why he was actually trying to figure it out, anyone in his situation wouldn’t care, Martha broke up with him she didn’t want him anymore, so what was he doing at her house trying to fix something he didn’t even know what it was. “Why’s everything about you?” she wanted to know, she hated it that Jack was asking her so many questions. “You did nothing” she told him. “Then why are you pissed of at me, earlier today you didn’t even want to talk to me, you just walked of” Jack informed her. “Yeah what’s your point?” Martha wanted to know, she couldn’t help but be smart back to him. “You know what forget it, just forget I ever came” he told her getting up from the couch, he didn’t know why he bothered in the first place. Martha hesitated for a second, but she couldn’t keep it in any longer. “So how’s your girlfriend?” she said blurting it out. “What girlfriend” Jack wanted to know, he sat back down on the couch. “Ohhhh” he said knowing what she meant, why would she think that they were together. “So this is what it’s about, Ashley?” Jack asked. “No” she said in defence. “But yo-“Jack began but Martha cut him off. “Whatever” Martha told him, she tried to remain uninterested, but she wanted to know what was going on with them, even if it was going to hurt. “She’s not my girlfriend” Jack told her. “No she just wearing your clothes and cuddling with you for the fun of it” Martha replied back sarcastically. “What?’ Jack asked he didn’t know where this was all coming from. “You know what?” Jack began he was done being nice if she wasn’t going to bother neither was he. “You’re the one that broke up with me” Jack reminded her. Martha said nothing. “Yes, you made the decision to do that, not me” he yelled at her, before standing up and heading for the door, he knew it was best if he’d left, he might say something he would regret. Martha waited for the doors to slam before showing her emotions. It was true everything Jack had said was true; she was the one that let him go. But she also knew it was his fault in the first place. She needed to get away from this, needed to get away from Ashley and from Jack; she wanted to clear her head. She knew if she hanged around it was only cause more drama and she wasn’t up for it Suddenly an idea popped into her head. She quickly got her phone and dialed a number. “Granddad, hey it’s Martha” she spoke into the phone. “Yes I’m ok, I just wanted to tell you I’m going away for a bit” she said trying to stop herself crying, she knew her granddad would know something’s up and come home straight away and she didn’t’ feel like talking about Jack right now to him. “To the city” she answered back. “Don’t worry I’ll be fine just for a couple of days” she added. “Bye” she replied before hanging up. She let out a loud sigh, this is what she needed. Next Chapter: Martha’s back and why is everyone shocked? Yeah the next chapter is just going to be when Martha’s coming back, I’m not going to write whatever happens in between, just because there would be nothing lol
beckyboo Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 Fab chapter Omg Martha's pregnany aint she? Update ASAP
vale4eva Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 ^^Look at Becky! Jumping to conclusions! No i predict she'l just come back and she'l have turned into some kind slut monster. Flash car, leather pants, dark shades and what not Great chapter. But i wish Martha would get her head together, she broke up with Jack, now she has to except the fact that he can move on. And what shes doing is only going to push him further towrds Ashley! Dear dear... Update soon
puja Posted April 10, 2007 Report Posted April 10, 2007 Grr, Martha and her stubborness! I hope this break does her some good. I'd love for her to come back totally different (in a good way though) then, the battle for Jack would be on again!
Tasha Posted April 11, 2007 Report Posted April 11, 2007 lol great chapter. I wonder if Martha will come back with a boyfriend That'll be awesome More please
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