sevenpuddings Posted August 12, 2006 Report Posted August 12, 2006 Oh Kase, that was so tragically beautiful! Maddie and Henry was touching, so very touching, I just knew that when he reached out she'd take his hand. But Maddie and Luke are still pretending, and falling apart at the seams... and Belle... god Belle, admit it! Shes so damn stubborn! Your story just keeps drawing me in, deeper and deeper. I love the how you write them pretending not to care, and how you underlay it with the more important issues that they can't seem to deal with. I cannot wait for more, this truly is an amazing story! Quote
kase Posted August 12, 2006 Report Posted August 12, 2006 (edited) Aww thanks Jess, I'm glad you like it. But that is way too much flattery! I'm glad you're understanding anything. I'll try write some more soonish! Edited August 12, 2006 by kase Quote
Jackieleanne Posted August 12, 2006 Author Report Posted August 12, 2006 Great two chapters Jess, Matilda and Henry like Jess said were touching, moved me to tears nearly its good to see them talking again. I hope Matilda is going to be ok and that her and Lucas stop pretending that everything is ok. Quote
matty and luke forever Posted August 12, 2006 Report Posted August 12, 2006 That was so beautiful!!! As Jess has said the part with Mattie and Henry were sooooo touching!!! I can't waitto see what happens, update soon! Quote
sevenpuddings Posted August 13, 2006 Report Posted August 13, 2006 Kase, that was breathtaking. Seriously, it was emotionally so stunning, so full off feeling, so full of everything that needed to be there. I felt Maddies pain, Lukes pain, felt their suffering and then their almost there forgiveness. And at the end, his hope and her fear. I didn't even want Henry and Belle in that one, because I was so darn captivated by Maddie and Luke. I cannot wait for more, but do your work and then write some for us. I can feel an ambiguous ending coming, and I love those Quote
kase Posted August 13, 2006 Report Posted August 13, 2006 Thanks Jess! I'm glad you like it! I really enjoyed writing a whole chapter for Mattie and Luke, I figured they deserved one Quote
Jackieleanne Posted August 13, 2006 Author Report Posted August 13, 2006 That was brilliant Kase it was so emotional and captivating really well written. Im glad that they are starting to work things out. Can't wait to see what happens. Quote
matty and luke forever Posted August 13, 2006 Report Posted August 13, 2006 That was brilliant Kase it was so emotional and captivating really well written. Im glad that they are starting to work things out. Can't wait to see what happens. My comments must be getting so repeptitive!! I totally agree Jackie!! I can really get into the characters and how they feel deep down!!! It's fantastic writing, you should be proud!!!! Quote
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