Plans Are Meant to Be Broken (by kase) - comments

[sally]

great chpt update asap

[tasha7905]

Fantastic, I think I know what Matilda is up to. The interaction between henry and Belle is amazing, I really hope she gives into him soon they make a wicked couple. Hope there is more soon.

[sevenpuddings]

*sniffs* Oh Kase, that was amazingly perfect. Seriously, the cutting between each scene was like the almost ending of a wonderful movie, or story, when everything had crashed down around them and they are only beginning to pick up the pieces. I loved how Matilda and Henry had their moment, and the Matilda and Ric, and I loved the emotions and descriptions and how everything is just flowing. It will be so sad to see this story come to an end, but still, there are two more chapters to look forward to, and I can't wait to read them!

Well done!

[kase]

Aww, thanks Jess! I'm so glad you liked it. It's good you liked the Mattie/Henry and then Mattie/Ric scenes, I felt that a lot of interaction between characters became scarce throughout the story and I wanted to have more in the ending chapters.

Thanks for reading and commenting

[Jackieleanne]

Awww seriously im holding back the tears that was so sad, I agree with everything Jess said that was so brilliantly written you captured the emotions perfectly and I absolutely adored Matilda and Henry. Great work.

[kase]

Thanks Jackie, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for all the feedback and comments throughout the whole story, I'm glad you felt moved by this chapter. Hopefully there'll be more soon.

Edited September 17, 2006 by kase

[matty and luke forever]

Fantastically brilliant!!! I, like many others, was holding back the tears!!! Amazing Kase... well done!!

[tasha7905]

Tears were definately coming to my eyes. That was a fantastic chapter, I really hope they can get back together when she is better.

Edited September 18, 2006 by tasha7905

[sevenpuddings]

Yes... but NOOOOOO!

Okay, on one hand you gave me a very hot Belle/Henry reunion, which makes me want to make icons... but on the other, a heartbreaking moment between Mattie and Luke, but I can't even begin to guess where you're going to take the epilogue. I don't want it to end Kase, and if it has to, I don't want it to end this way! It was so beautifully written Kase, I felt the tears, and I wanted to hug them all, especially Luke. I really hope Ric doesn't give Luke or Henry a reason to hate him if they really do go to Melbourne...

I can't wait for the epilogue!

[kase]

Thanks Jess Well, it hasn't ended yet. The next one is set a little into the future so you'll get to know how it turned out. I'm glad you liked the Henry/Belle renunion! Aw, it's nice to know you were touched by it.