Martha's Secret (by Nicom) - comments

[katie343]

i've got tears in my eyes that was beautiful

[xGlowingAngelx]

Wow! that was so beautiful. It was such an emotional story and I truely felt for all the characters involved. Martha was so brave. I'm glad she let Jack back into her life as he really helped her through it, and I'm glad he's telling Matt all about his mum and that he still talks about her with such fondness. It was a truely heart-wrenching story in both a saddened and lovely way. Well done Nicole and please do more fics soon x x x

Edited May 26, 2006 by BackToTheBayRules

[[.jessa-belle.]]

I am crying....seriously...i couldnt imagine what it would feel like to be Jack....I dont think you can really know until you do loose somone you love.......

[Jamey-Maria]

Nicole i am crying! I'm finding it quite hard to type because i can't see the keys, lol. That was so beuatiful and so wonderfully written that i'm glad you did it the way you did! Yes it was sad but it wouldn't have been so effective any other way. I'm totally blubering now, i'v read so many sad fics today and the ep of hna i juat watched made me emotional too! When i realised that Martha was gone and Jack had Matt my heart sank, it's really nice how he has a their son to raise and that he looks like Martha! I'm going to go and cry somemore lol, WELL DONE!!!

Edited May 27, 2006 by jacknmarthaluver

[Jacksthehottest]

omg nicole im speechless, that was sooooo good, it was really said:( i never expected that kind of ending, but the way you wrote it was just so beautiful, Jack is gonna make the best dad in the world, i have to say this is the BEST fanfic i have read, great writing nicole

[-lolly-]

OMG i am crying... That was beautifully written. I cant think of anything to say to tell you just how good that story was. I didnt expect that ending, i thought they would just live happily ever after. How wrong i was. Thank you for writing that i loved it even though it made me cry.

[las vegas]

i loved thisfan fic really well written, welldone.

[Nicom]

Thank you!

I was crying when I wrote it.. Lol. I have to admit. I felt kind of sad doing it, but I just kept thinking "Omg Martha's dead, Jack's all lonely"

lol. But I don't think it would have been right for me to end it any other way.

This fic isn't normal for me.. I kind of did it for reasons which no-one should write a fic for. I did it so I could prove bay_girl wrong when she predicted what was going on, and prove to myself (and other people) that I could write a sad ending! Lol. Oh and also to write a short-ish fic. Lol. I guess I kinda failed on that, seen as though they were quite BIG chapters. lol. But still, a hell of a lot shorter than my other fics!

And in response to BacktotheBay, yea I've gone and thought of another fic. I wrote a couple of chapters on it last night. Lol. Sadly its a long one, so I'm going to try and forget about it! Lol. God, why do I ramble soo much? How long is this flippin post? lol

Right. Thanks again!

Love Me x x

[linzie_mac01]

In response to you post abot Martha dying Nicole! I am sad that you killed her off cause i really did think that you would never do something like that, especially after you were so emtional reading Dolly's fics! lol. But this it actually fitted in with this story and you wrote it well and it made me feel a happy sad rather than a get murdered storyline. If you know what i mean lol.

Anyway I cannot wait to read your new fic

[Nicom]

In response to you post abot Martha dying Nicole! I am sad that you killed her off cause i really did think that you would never do something like that, especially after you were so emtional reading Dolly's fics! lol. But this it actually fitted in with this story and you wrote it well and it made me feel a happy sad rather than a get murdered storyline. If you know what i mean lol.

Anyway I cannot wait to read your new fic

I know, me neither! Lol.

If you look back at the first post I did in this thread, I said that I was poorly when I thought about it. Lol. I was lonely, ill and tired... which made me angry/sad, which I totally think reflected in this story! Lol. That's why I don't like writing my fics when I'm in a bad/sad mood! Lol. It's just not a wise decision! Lol

And I'm trying to forget about the fic!! Lol. It won't be up anyone until Jealous Eyes has finished.. if it ever finishes. lol