Annette Posted March 21, 2006 Report Posted March 21, 2006 That was good. But how did Angie get the blood on her face? I presume funeral attendants do come and knock on the door because they come and get you from the house, and otherwise you might not realise they had arrived! Quote
I love music Posted March 21, 2006 Report Posted March 21, 2006 That was good. But how did Angie get the blood on her face? I presume funeral attendants do come and knock on the door because they come and get you from the house, and otherwise you might not realise they had arrived! OOps, I was just about to go to bed but came back... She was pressing her forehead against the stair rail while she was listening to her Mum's phone call to Uncle Jason. Thanks for reading. Going off to bed now! Quote
Skykat Posted March 22, 2006 Report Posted March 22, 2006 Fantastic chapter. This is so believable and the descriptions are so vivid I can just picture it. Poor Angie and Josie for that matter. I love your style of writing, please post again soon. Kat.xx Quote
I love music Posted March 28, 2006 Report Posted March 28, 2006 I'll try and update this before my big move at the weekend but I somehow doubt if I'll manage to as I've only really got tomorrow and Thursday to write - and I should be busy sorting stuff out now, not on this forum! Quote
Skykat Posted March 30, 2006 Report Posted March 30, 2006 Great chapter. I'm gutted you won't be updating for a while, hope your move goes well though. Quote
Annette Posted April 27, 2006 Report Posted April 27, 2006 That was great! Big surprise about Uncle Jason, but made all Angie's actions make sense. I think you did a great job of suggesting how Angie might have become as twisted as she did. And I loved the weather forecast in the news article, v. amusing! Quote
I love music Posted April 28, 2006 Report Posted April 28, 2006 Thanks. I'll do an epilogue to this next, but it will only be short. After severe writer's block, and tho I've never been particularly interested in Angie, this fic kind of grew on me in the end! ) Quote
Skykat Posted May 1, 2006 Report Posted May 1, 2006 What a great conclusion! Somehow I'm not that surprised about Uncle Jason, like Anette said it made everything make sense. Makes you really feel for Angie. A great story and really realistic, look forward to reading more of your stuff soon!xx Quote
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