In The Dark (by bay girl) - comments

[linzie_mac01]

OMG i can't believe he killed his own mother, Corey is a complete and utter loony!

You know we are all waiting for Jack to come and save the day but please get a wiggle on, i can't wait! lol

Great writing though, it so wasn't boring! In fact i'm glad that you thought of a different Corey family incident, very clever!

[da_love_goddess]

Great chapter. Corey is really freaking me out. I never thought he was a cold-blooded killer.

[~emma~]

What a freak, he killed his own mother!!!

Loving the story though, keep up the great work

[-lolly-]

This is such a great story!! Im addicted to it (and all the other jack and martha ones lol ) I hope Jack can come to the rescue!

[linzie_mac01]

Oh Alf and Ric, Corey didn't take the break-up at all well! Please someone...anyone...please help Martha and Irene

Great update Baygirl, i love reading this fic!!

[Jamey-Maria]

I think i'm becoming addicted to this fan fic (no actually i already am) Great chapter, aww Irene was so sweet. Jack if you don't get your butt down there soon youe going to regret it!!! Please update A.S.A.P!!!

[Nicom]

Very good! *claps hands*

I think Corey not taking the break-up too well is a bit of an understatement.. lol.

Please hurry up with the next chapter! I want to know how they get out alive. They better god damn do!! lol

Post asap! =D

[-Jade-]

Jack what are you doing?? Get down there and save Martha you idiot! Great chapter! I'm loving this fic! Please please please update ASAP!!!!!

[da_love_goddess]

Come on Jack, you've got to save Martha and Irene. Geeat chapter bay girl.

[Sal_gurl]

Jack hurry and save martha

Love it please post more soon