In The Dark (by bay girl) - comments

[~emma~]

What an awesome chapter.

They all need to get in there and save irene and martha before its too late!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter

[da_love_goddess]

Another great chapter. I hope thy figure out it's Corey. Hope you update soon.

[Sal_gurl]

Loving it please post more soon

[Jamey-Maria]

Ha ha! Yay now your getting somewhere Jacky boy! Finally thet are realising it is Corey. Great chapter as usual, can't wait till you update.

[princess_jessik]

OMG Jack's the new detective in town, we don't need Peter anymore. lol

Wow great update! Can't wait to read more!

[linzie_mac01]

Yay go Jack!!!

I knew he wasn't a good cop for nothing! I hope he goes in there and punches Coreys lights out! lol

Another great update, thanks

[Nicom]

Awww clever Jack!! lol

Go on! Get in there my son!! Lol.. sorry, i don't know where that came from.. lol

Great chapter! Please update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!

EDIT: OH! And I forgot to say how well you did with Alf and Colleen's dialogue! It was like it was them! Lol. It was amazing! Well done! Really sounded like them.

Edited May 20, 2006 by xxNicolexx

[bay girl]

Thanks Nicole.

I had to really think about Alf and Colleen's dialogue. I wanted to make sure that it sounded just like them. I'm glad that it worked out well.

Edited May 21, 2006 by bay girl

[~emma~]

Awesome chapter...

YAY go Jack. Now all you have to do is get in there and save Martha!!

Keep up the great work... i can't wait till the next chapter.

[da_love_goddess]

Great chapter bay girl. Yay Jack has figured it out. I hope he rescues Martha and Irene now.