In The Dark (by bay girl) - comments

[Sal_gurl]

Please post more soon

[katie343]

that's great please post more soon

[princess_jessik]

OMG!!! yay the boss finally believed him. Hurry up & get in there Jack & bust Martha out from the freaky boy. lol

Thanks for the update bay_girl!

[Jamey-Maria]

Martha you clever, clever girl. Don't worry, everyone loves you, they won't call you names:P This was my favourite bit: You better watch out Corey, Jack said to himself. Because if you’ve even touched Martha, I’ll kill you. Ha ha, I'm going to love it when Jack sees Corey and the marks he has left on Martha!!!!!!!!!

Well done Bay girl, i loved that chapter. Please update soon as the suspence is killing me.

[xsianx]

Love this story!. Jacks going to kick Corey's ass when he sees what he has done to Martha (can't wait)lol

Well done Martha letting them know it was Corey (no-one will blame you or call you bad names). Hope they rescue Martha and Irene soon.

Please update soon your an amazing write and this story is brill.

xsianx

[tasha7905]

Brilliant story. I cant wait for Jack and Martha to be reunited and declare there love for each other, and of course Jack kicing Corey's butt. Post more soon please.

[bell]

hurry jack hurry save them

its soo good cant wait till you update

[Nicom]

Omg! That was great! That was lovely to read! My Bday is just getting better.. lol

Come on Jack, just get in there. Martha needs you!

Update soon please!?!!

[Sal_gurl]

love it please post more soon

[linzie_mac01]

OMG the suspense is killing me!!! Hurry Jack cause I bet Martha has made Corey even angrier now that everyone knows its him.

I can't wait to see the look on Jacks face when he sees what Corey has done to Martha, yay go Jack and do the same to Corey!!