bell Posted May 27, 2006 Report Share Posted May 27, 2006 oh my god - what can i say, corey is just plain discusting, i feel so sorry for martha, jack go beat up corey and then shoot him if you want, irene just dont die and bay girl just update soon please.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted May 27, 2006 Report Share Posted May 27, 2006 Jack get in there and hurt Corey. I cant wait for the next chapetr. This is really great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted May 27, 2006 Report Share Posted May 27, 2006 (edited) Oh My God!!! I was totally at the edge of my stool!! Lol. WOW! That was ace! OMG I want to kill Corey! *Breathes* my face is hot cos i'm so angry! Lol Poor Jack! Lol. I normally don't agree with bad language, but it was needed! Lol! Well done! Please don't leave it long before next chapter! I'm really loving this fic!! Agreed totally. eww Corey is unhinged and gross. lol Poor Martha I would be soo scared and Irene watching and not being able to help Messgae to Corey 'Jacks going to kick your a*s' Great chap, can't wit for next chapter!!! Sianx Edited May 27, 2006 by XS-I-A-NX Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 I'm loving your story!! Keep posing really awesome!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da_love_goddess Posted May 28, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 Well done bay girl. Great few chapters. Can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollipop_lover11 Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 good job I just read all of it at once keep up the good work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted May 28, 2006 Report Share Posted May 28, 2006 LOve it please get martha out soon jack Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted May 31, 2006 Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 (edited) OMG that was great! I feel sad for Jack though Come on Martha needs to be saved now!! It feels like she's been in that house for years! lol Fantastic writing as usual! I loved the way you explained how jack was feeling - very emotinal. God Corey is such a loony. Please update ASAP!!! Edited May 31, 2006 by jackandmartha!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted May 31, 2006 Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I had to have a kitkat whilst eating that.. i just felt the urge! Lol. That was brilliant! I'm so pleased you updated! Please update as soon as possible! Please!!! I need to know what's going on!! Please? Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kase Posted May 31, 2006 Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 that was great! i hope they get her out soon poor jack Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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