In The Dark (by bay girl) - comments

[lucaslover]

OMG I can't u believe u left it like that I h8 u so much lol only jokin but please u gotta update soon cant wait

[xsianx]

WOW!!!!

Oh my god!! that was absolutly brilliant

Go Martha, go Martha, go Martha!!

Die Corey, die Corey, die Corey!! (sorry abit hyper)

Lol Martha well done for winding Corey up

Can't wait for next chapter! thank you x

[linzie_mac01]

Ah bless, this is the Martha we all love Clever girl but stupid girl for putting yourself in so much danger. I really hope she shot Corey! When i was reading it i was overcome suddenly by this strange sensation, like a tingling feeling. I briefly wondered what it was and then i realised that I should really stop holding my breath cause it was making me dizzy. Talk about knowing how Martha was feeling lol

Oh i almost forgot: please update i don't think its good for me having to hold my breath for much longer

Edited June 4, 2006 by linzie_mac01

[katie343]

update soon please can't wait for more

[-michelle-]

Great chapter. Please update soon!

[lollipop_lover11]

great chapter.

I wonder if Corey is going to die.

Martha is very clever, I probably never would have thought of that though hopefully I am never going to be in that position.

Please update soon

[lozzyluvscats]

Does this mean that Jack and Martha will finally be reunited? I hope so, cos I think I might burst soon.

This is an amazing story - I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

[xxtessaxx]

OMG that was sooo good.

GO MARTHA!!

cant wait till the next chapter

[Brodstar]

I lovin in the dark its 1 of my favs so plz update soon ive been waiting 4 ages!!

[rachael_87]

Hey just wanted to say I love your story. I've been reading it on fanfiction.net and just found it on here and read the whole thing again. Can't wait for Jack and Martha to be reunited.