SfanS Posted October 15, 2006 Report Posted October 15, 2006 Oooohhhh, getting interesting...very good, well written! Quote
Skykat Posted October 15, 2006 Report Posted October 15, 2006 Oh my god no! Please don't keep me in suspense... Quote
Skykat Posted October 16, 2006 Report Posted October 16, 2006 Nooo! ILM I'm completely hooked on this. Please don't hurt Kane! The taste of clouds had me in stitches. Great chapter.xx Quote
SfanS Posted October 17, 2006 Report Posted October 17, 2006 Me *gasps* Oh NOOOOO!!! Scotty is so evil.......................................... Kane needs to fight back, and Scott should get the blame once in a while!! Quote
Skykat Posted October 19, 2006 Report Posted October 19, 2006 no I take it back...go away again! Measles and torpedoes...nobody writes kids quite the way you do ILM. Another fantastic chapter.xx Quote
Skykat Posted October 20, 2006 Report Posted October 20, 2006 You evil little.... Great chapter. That kiss was so innocent and sweet. I loved it yet again ILM. Quote
SfanS Posted October 21, 2006 Report Posted October 21, 2006 ahhh, some more chapters to greet me....hahaha, they are so cute!!! Well written! Quote
Skykat Posted October 22, 2006 Report Posted October 22, 2006 that was beautiful...and horrible. You were right it did make me cry but there was some really touching moments in there too. I hope Kirsty's granddad figures out what's going on. Poor Kane, really well written ILM. Quote
Skykat Posted October 24, 2006 Report Posted October 24, 2006 In the distance the blue sea sparkled in the sunlight while a ship sailed leisurely across the water. Nearer inland the surfers would be riding the waves, taking advantage of the wind that was frantically rustling the garden trees, but the myriad of buildings and streets inbetween blocked an actual view of the beach from the Phillips’ dismal house. What an absolutely stunning description. Fabulous! nearly toppled the dresser while experimentally seeing if the bottom drawer would still take his weight if he stood on it. Kirsty said her Grandad would make everything alright and Kane had never trusted anyone like he trusted Kirsty. "But I haven't got any cheese, Grandad!" So cute! I love how you get into their childhood thoughts, it's so realistic the way you write children. OMG cliffhanger! Love The Dark, poor Kane's terror. You've really got him tugging at the heart strings now ILM. Kirsty just has to get there ontime and don't let everyone think the worst of Kane...please? Quote
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