belgshep Posted December 6, 2005 Report Posted December 6, 2005 Yeah, I loved that bit too The Pheonix! Also, some great and really pathetic Posh Josh and Saddo Seb deaths in this batch. Meanwhile Posh Josh and Saddo Seb sneaked into the diner to nick some crumbs off the floor and accidentally garrotted themselves on some soft pink fluffy wool that was hanging from a table.Dying instantly!Really loved that one, especially the fact the wool was soft, pink and fluffy!!!!! Must remember to pay close attention to such details when I begin writing!!! Quote
The Phoenix Posted December 6, 2005 Report Posted December 6, 2005 Poor Leah, locked in a freezer she has used for years and then all this! Its nearly as disasterous as Danni's pledges for attention! Quote
belgshep Posted December 7, 2005 Report Posted December 7, 2005 Loved Kane, Mark and Tash’s expedition into the bush to find the antidote plant and the dinosaur people they found (I remember that you like dinosaurs!). Rhys’s vendetta against Kane is quite a change too after all that time as the “son he never hadâ€! Saddo and Posh are looking at the naked pictures of Dani when they see Rhys approaching ...his face is purple and contorted with rage , his eyes bulging and a big vein in his forehead throbbing.Another one of those graphic descriptions of Rhys!!! Made a start kicking around some ideas for Reborn chapter but I think I need to re-read Reborn as I found I’m kinda hazy on what was happening there. Thanks for the vote of confidence, by the way!! Quote
The Phoenix Posted December 7, 2005 Report Posted December 7, 2005 They send her off on a very time consuming wild goose chase looking for varios non-existent specialists all over the USA Lots of doctors all over the United States lie to Greeek Leah Greek Leah first starts annoying all the doctors in USA but she is sooo loud that she is deported for noise violation ....she returns to SB expecting a warm reception and is most upset that everyone appears to be shunning her Virtually everyone is the bay tries their best to stop Greek Leah from her current whiney overload. Virtually everyone is the bay tries their best to stop Greek Leah from her current whiney overload. POOR LEAH! How much more can the big mouthed chef take???? And who would of thought Danni's taste in clothes would cause so much trouble? Quote
belgshep Posted December 7, 2005 Report Posted December 7, 2005 Silly Scott H has got lost on his way from the shower block , where he and Kimmy were admiring each others pecs,to the main house at the caravan park ...will anyone take pity on the moron and help him find his way??!!Ha, ha! Love it when Scott is dumb! So, Greek Leah is fixed, but is now squeaking and eating cheese!! The Pheonix – it’s my guess that Leah will get much, much more to put up with! Still loving the dino people with Charlotte (and Mark is helping them!). Also loved Rhys’s brain op and the fact that Flynn sadistically enjoyed performing it!! [Work on Reborn chapter still in progress. Might not have time to do much more until the weekend as rather a lot on this week, but it’s coming along nicely, I hope! I did use the previous chapter as a base so I must be getting the hang of it!] Quote
belgshep Posted December 8, 2005 Report Posted December 8, 2005 Posh Josh & Saddo Seb, despite their love of each other, both want to see the 4 girls pleasuring each other. Both losers discover that things will take place at sally & Gypsy’s house and posh & saddo eagerly watch Mandy & the others at "work". But it all becomes too much for the 2 losers - both their tiny appendages explode simultaneously, killing the boys instantly.That was quite a spectacular Saddo Seb and Posh Josh death! Dani and the cardboard cutouts was a great storyline. Dani and Norman … ''Daddy meet my snookums '', she simpered , introducing Norman.Well … yuk!!! I love the vengeful roo – brilliant!! I really like it when the roos strike back! And the Belgian F1 Grand Prix got a mention too!!!!! How sweet of your wives to arrange that (and also a surprise in store!) Quote
belgshep Posted December 9, 2005 Report Posted December 9, 2005 (edited) Before i write anything else, apologies for a BIG error that i made yesterday. i jumped a screen or 3 when on the old official site boards, so the chapter i labelled 283 yesterday is actaully further down the track. i'll start today with the REAL chapter 283 !!! aplogies once more !!!Now that you mention it, I did notice a few things that didn’t quite make sense (like Floss’s spirit in Hayley) but I was a bit tired, so I didn’t pay too much attention. Besides things don’t always make sense in the Tales! All is explained, and it really doesn’t matter – we just got a preview! Great story about Flynn and Leah and their past lives, especially when they found out he strangled her because of her voice. Some things live on then! Rhys was feeling very put out and was sulking so much that he was in danger of tripping up over his bottom lip. He, he. Wondeful!!! Another great Rhys line from Wanda! I loved Saddo Seb and Posh Josh getting squashed behind the bathroom door, and also their deaths in the sex shop. I seem to recall that Saddo Seb came to a sticky end (literally) in a sex shop once before (don’t think he actually died then), so it seems he didn’t learn his lesson. Not that we expected him to! Edited December 9, 2005 by belgshep Quote
belgshep Posted December 11, 2005 Report Posted December 11, 2005 Dani and Norman announce their engagement ....has the fact that Norman told Dani he was wealthy prompted this action ....and will Dani find out that the old git is lying??!!That’s a little bit like Amanda/Graham, except for the lying about the money! Aha, now we know why Rhys plays netball! And I loved Scott being a giant! When Beth hears whet her silly son has been saying, he grabs a tape measure and tries to prove that silly Scott isn't a giant any more.Hmmmmm, measuring WHAT we ask ourselves?!!!!! And it looks like Norman is a secret motor racing fan too, since he wanted to go to Belgium!!!! You’d better watch out! Quote
belgshep Posted December 13, 2005 Report Posted December 13, 2005 Couldn’t get on the BTTB site yesterday so now I have 10 chapters to comment on (and so much funny stuff)!!! And the landmark Chapter 300. Wow, you guys were certainly prolific writers! With all this stuff about Irene and Barry, I still can’t get it out of my head that earlier Mr Hyde was actually Finlay!!!!!! Beth and Alf have been so amused by the whole netball story that they did not notice Colleen's absence until some time later.....''she's probably with that little turd Max,'' said Beth fondly about her step-nephew. ''Strike me roan,haven't seen the little turd in an age'' answered AlfThat was so funny. I couldn’t stop laughing for ages! I love the evil-eyed mad Max with his red glowing eyes! Alf’s wig and subsequent Seb-style transplant is also brilliant!!! As they turn the corner they see Posh Josh and Saddo Seb snogging under a tree. Rikki remembers that yesterday no one could be bothered to kill the pathetic duo as everyone had far more important things to do.Ooooops!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote
The Phoenix Posted December 14, 2005 Report Posted December 14, 2005 ''My fishy is dead,'' sobs Silly Scott. ''But what about ME!! What has your stupid fish got to do with ME!! I am the only one allowed to cry , you haven't suffered like ME!!'' shouted Dani,causing Silly Scott to cry even more. But what about HER! People should pay more attention to HER! The needs of a fish and scott who both haf 5 second memory aren't as important as HER! In other words, classic Danni moment! Quote
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