Written In The Stars (by Jackieleanne) - comments

[Gypsy & Will Fan]

Brilliant Jackie! Loved Jack in that chapter!

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks Penny im having fun writting Jack.

[aejdude]

Fantastic three chapters there Jackie. I really like how jack is dealing with matilda and like that he thinks of her as his little sister. I'm happy that martha's having twins! Hopefully Matilda will be ok, and Lucas is there for her always which is good.

Can't wait for more!

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks Aaron ive nearly finished writting the next chapter should be up in about ten minutes.

[Gypsy & Will Fan]

Awww Jackie, your making me cry! Poor Lucas and Jack!

[Jackieleanne]

Awww sorry for making you cry Penny. Thanks again for the feedback.

[aejdude]

Great but emotional chapter Jackie, i feel sorry for jack and lucas they must be going through hell at the moment i hope matilda pulls through.

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks Aaron ill try not and keep you all in suspense for too long.

[sevenpuddings]

Wow. That was so dramatic. Poor Mattie, poor Lucas, poor Beth (not knowing what the hell is going on with her baby) It was so suspenceful Jackie, amazing, but still, I'm slightly disgruntled because I didn't get any more of it! *Whinges* I wanna know if Mattie is going to be okay! So please hurry along just one measly update, please, please, please!

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks Jess next chapter will be up tommorow im off to bed because im shattered.