Written In The Stars (by Jackieleanne) - comments

[aejdude]

Great four chapters.

Hope Martha and Jack get through this because it will be hard for martha on her own to raise two babies.

I loved the mattie and luke scenes.

Update soon.

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks aaron, you should find out in the next chapter. Glad you liked it.

[>>Emma<<]

Omg 2 updates!!!! Yayyyyyyyyyyy!!! That was brilliant Jackie, lets just hope that Jack doesn't get called into work and that Matlida says yes!! Update soon

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks glad that you liked it.

[xsianx]

Well planned Jacky boy.

Glad Martha forgave him.

Thank you for the update

[baby gurl]

its gr8..jacks a perfect gentle men..lol...

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks you two.

[-Laura-]

Fantabulous! Was so happy when i came back and you had updated again! Thanks!

[kase]

Woo, a double update! That was great Jackie, I really enjoyed it It's sweet watching Martha go on a hormonal rollercoaster! It was funny when she woke up and his Jack in the stomach.

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks you two might try and get an update up before I go out.