Too Much To Take (by Ashirr-Leigh) - comments

[Jackieleanne]

Great chapter, I can't wait for more.

[Claire]

Glad you updated - this fic is always worth the wait! Looking forward to the next chapter!

[Jackieleanne]

Good chapet Ash. Worth the wait. Can't wait to read more.

[I love music]

I had tears in my eyes through most of that chapter . Brilliant writing!

[I love music]

Everyone said their thanks to Alf and then were left to their own devices. Food and drinks had been laid out by Alf and Irene but apart from that, they were left to amuse themselves. Some had brought cards, others pen and paper but most people were looking from the Sutherlands to Kane, waiting for something to erupt.

Haha, exactly what would happen in real life, I reckon! Wow, you're good, Ashirr-Leigh. Great fic. (I'm a bit stuck on mine at the moment as the part I'm working on is harrowing but I'll get back to it soon)

[Jackieleanne]

Great chapter Ash, I aggree with I love Music, your fanfics are great.

[Di]

I don't know how you do it, you allway's cram so much emotion into your Fan fic's Ashirr-Leigh and you are so young with all that talent you will go along way. Thank's for a very emotionally charged chapter,even though It made me cry.

[Di]

Thank's Ashirr-Leigh,

I glad they got there feeling's out in the open, Poor Dani yeah you got all that right with her it doesn't away's mean the person who did this to you remind's you of what happened it can also mean what you have written, eg, places,the couch.there's gonna more fire work's to come I can feel it.

Thank's again Di xx

[I love music]

Really great fic, Ashirr-Leigh, I always look forward to your updates.

[Jackieleanne]

Thanks ash, that was a brilliant chapter. I can't wait to read more.