Ella's Daddy (by emmasi) - comments

[Eli]

Awww, cute!

I have to admit though, when Robbie said he needed to tell Ella something I almost expected it to be that he was in love with Kim

But seriously, this is really good. I like how you don't go on and on about details but simply tell a story, adding pieces that make you see it all from a child's point of view

[emmasi]

Thanks. I wrote it as if it were the text in a picture book