xsianx Posted December 26, 2006 Report Posted December 26, 2006 Thank you for the pm Marry Boxmas! (my word for boxing day/mas) Aww That was so cute. Someone must die lol come on be mean Emma, Jack?
baby gurl Posted December 26, 2006 Report Posted December 26, 2006 EMMA!! you finally posted it!! it was a funny chapter, loved how abby said that she's only 3 years old! lmao! update soon....
xGlowingAngelx Posted December 26, 2006 Report Posted December 26, 2006 awww great chapter. I kind of felt a tad sorry for Martha though, they both wanted Jack! lol. It was lovely though.
beckyboo Posted December 26, 2006 Report Posted December 26, 2006 Sian do you seriously think for one second we would kill Jack?? Well done Emz Well I guess its my turn next then next chapter should be up on thurs maybe xxxxxxxx
~Natasha~ Posted December 26, 2006 Report Posted December 26, 2006 This fic is great, beautifully written by both of you. Cant wait until next part.
SfanS Posted December 26, 2006 Report Posted December 26, 2006 THat was funny. I know a few three year olds, and I mix them together, and I came up with a picture in my head for Abby. I could picture her saying "Daddy, you're ignoring me" It was so cute! Well done! *Looks at Becky for the next chapter hopefully*
beckyboo Posted December 27, 2006 Report Posted December 27, 2006 Sian maybe this chapter will make you feel a little bit sorry for Jack This is for Sian who proof read it for me thank youuuuuuuu Chapter 10 Martha arrived home and went to collect Amie from Tony’s and as soon as Martha walked in she told Martha that she loved her and misses her put a smile on Martha’s face. Amie was so glad that her mummy had came home if truth be told she was really missing Martha even though she put on a brave front inside all she wanted is for Abby to get better so that she would have her fun out going mummy and daddy back. Martha thanked Tony as Amie thanked her granddad and they two of them left for home. As Martha was putting Amie to bed Amie asked her the question everyone was wondering but wouldt ask… “Mummy” Amie said “Yes sweetie” Martha answered “Mummy if I ask you something you wont get mad at me will you” Amie asked her “Of course not baby, why would I get mad at my darling little girl” Martha replied “Is Abigail going to die” she asked her Martha was taken aback by this question her and Jack had not discussed what to tell Amie about Abigail’s condition and now her daughter was asking if her little sister is going to die. “I don’t know baby girl, I don’t know” Martha sighed sadly “I don’t want her to mummy” she relied “I no you don’t babe, nobody does” Martha told her “I will even let her play with my dollies” Amie told her starting to cry. Martha just held her daughter and wondered what would happen and she just let the silent tears roll down her face. Meanwhile at the hospital “Daddy I win again and you lose AGAIN” Abby told Jack proudly “Yeah that’s because you cheated” He told her “Come on daddy how can I cheat at snap” she told him smartly “Right missy its time you got some sleep” Jack told Abby “Daddy” Abigail said in sweetest baby voice she could “Yes angel” he answered her back “Can I fall asleep on your knee tonight please with a cherry on top” she said “Of course you can” Jack told her Jack and Abigail where lying on the bed and Jack was reading her a story Abigail was giggling at Jack funny voices but then all of sudden her face changed and she asked her father something “Daddy is I going to die?” she asked Jack Jack just looked at her and didt know what to say to her “Who told you, you were going to die princess” Jack asked her and pulled her on to his lap “Nobody but” she started to sob in to Jack chest saying she didt want to die A few hours had passed and both Martha and Amie were asleep when all of a sudden Amie woke up screaming “don’t die on us Abby don’t leave us please” Martha awoke to her daughters screams and cries and went to comfort her but all she ended up doing was breaking down and it was left to Amie to comfort her. “When I grow up daddy I want to be a nurse like all the nurses here who are helping me get better” Abby was telling Jack Jack just looked at his beautiful daughter she was him and Martha and Amie rolled into one little extra special person his baby girl. “And then I want to get married to a doctor, so we can play doctors and nurses and then I want to have a little baby so I can push her round the beach in a pram. Jack just look at her his heartbreaking, he knew in his heart none of that would happen and so while she gave him a goodnight hug the silent tears rolled down his cheeks as they did at home to his wife and daughter. R&R Emma its your turn now
xGlowingAngelx Posted December 27, 2006 Report Posted December 27, 2006 “I don’t want her to mummy” she relied ------ “I will even let her play with my dollies” Amie told her starting to cry. ----- “Daddy is I going to die?” she asked Jack These quotes sooo made me fill up. I felt so sorry for Amie. Great chapter, but I may have to stop reading if you keep making me cry...
Tasha Posted December 27, 2006 Report Posted December 27, 2006 And then I want to get married to a doctor, so we can play doctors and nurses ok that made me laugh. But now im crying. Becky, why you gotta make me cry *cries* Poor Abby, Amie, Martha and Jacky. She cant die, she just cant *cries again* Great chapter though More Please
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