beckyboo Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 Sian some more riddles please Chapter 20 “Martha this is so unfair people are out here” he cried out “I don’t care you made me do a nudie run sober so im making you do one now” she stuck her tongue out at him “I hate you for this Missy” he told her “No ya don’t” she replied happily. “Now let’s go” she added “What now” he said “No Jack next year of course now” she replied “But Martha its 11.00 and Noah’s will be emptying the place” he replied shakily “I really want to see you do this” she told him “But baby it’s so cold out there and people will see me” he tried to make her listen to him “Ohh but baby I don’t care now let’s go” she said They both walk out and reach the beach. “Right Mr Holden” she smiled cheekily at him “Yes baby” he was trying to win her round so he didt after to do this after all t was a freezing cold night “Strip” she told him “Oh come on baby its freezing” he moaned “I don’t care now strip” she told him again “Fine gladly” he said sarcastically Jack start to strip slowly when Martha intervened and Jack though maybe she had changed her mind “God jack you can’t do anything quickly” she told him “What” he said Martha starts to take his top off and shorts and then hands him a towel and tell him to strip underneath it. “It pay back time Mr Holden” she smirked and whipped the towel away Meanwhile as Jack was running down the beach McGrath and Alf and Lara and Natasha Martha’s younger sister were leaving the bar. “Oh my” Lara said starting to giggle “Is that Holden” McGrath asked shocked “Oh my who’s that hottie” Natasha asked them “That is your sister’s husband” Alf told Natasha “Well if new that was her husband I would have came sooner” she giggled McGrath was still speechless “That was one of my best detectives and hes running around the beach starkers in the middle of the night” he said clearly annoyed “There happy now” Jack said as he pulled the towel off a hysterical Martha “Very” she giggled “Sorry to interrupt you two but Martha you have a visitor” Alf told them “Who, oh my god Natasha what are you doing here” she asked her sister excitedly Jack was still standing there with the towel around his waist when McGrath came over “My word Holden what was that” he said “That was my husband doing a nudie run senior” Martha answered for him “But why” McGrath asked clearly confused “Because it was pay back and because jack was drunk he agreed to do it” she giggled Jack noticed this and was happy that Martha was giggling a smiling a lot tonight just what she need to be doing more often “Right Martha are you going to introduce me to your friend” he asks her “Oh my god jack she’s not my friend” she tells him “she’s my baby sister” “Oh” he laughs “how could I forget she is all you talk about” he tells her. “Well she’s my baby sister and im very proud of her” Martha smiles “And you have had way to much to drink your never this nice to me” Natasha giggles “Urgh my head hurts” Martha says heading into the kitchen where Natasha was sitting eating some toast. “Im not surprised” she giggled “It’s not funny” she moaned “Well guess who I spoke to this morning” Natasha said “I give up” Martha replied “Laura and Sian” she said “Oh really how are they” she asked “There coming down here” Natasha told her crossly “And that’s a problem because” she asked her little sister worriedly “Nothing” she said trying to sound happy “What up little one” Martha asked her “God you aint called me that in ages” Natasha told her “Well what’s up spill to your big sister” she told her “well it started about a year ago, I meet this boy Danny his name was he was amazing and then well he did something I thought know one would ever do to me” she started to cry “Tash he never did he yano” Martha asked her little sister afraid of the answer “God no Martha no way, he cheated on me” she told her “Oh who with did you know her or him” Martha asked Natasha giggled “it weren’t a him Mac it was a she and it was Sian” she told her sadly “And Laura kept it from me too” she added “But Sian didt mean to hurt you I mean your her baby sister” Martha said “Laura said they never told me because they wanted to protect me and then Macca found out and went mad at them and at Danny too” Natasha said “he even hit Danny” she added “Wow” Martha said “Sorry to tell you all this especially with Abby being hospital” Natasha told her sister “No don’t be im your big sister and it was a welcome distraction now lets go and pick up Amie and you can meet your new nephew Ellis” Martha said Preview Laura and Sian arrive Two of the bay boys are after two of the four sisters Is any of them a match for Abby
~Natasha~ Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 Go Macca! Looking after your little sis (Meeee)! Yey I am in the fic. Wooooooooooo. Love this fic and I hope you update real soon (And by that I mean nooooow) x
>>Emma<< Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 Good chapter Bec, I'm updating next - yay! I might make a really big fight happen!
~Natasha~ Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 Good chapter Bec, I'm updating next - yay! I might make a really big fight happen! Ooooh including me? x
beckyboo Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 There shall be no fight Emma martha needsa all of her sisters there for her not fighting
>>Emma<< Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 I have my way of incorporating these things such as fights, and yet making everyone happy such as them being there for martha, you wait until my update and all the pieces of the puzzle will fit
xsianx Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 lol damn! I have to think of some lol Where one family grows the sounds of crows and sun glows in the early morning sky - Thats crap. Good update! yess i'm a slut.
gawguss_tiff Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 yess i'm a slut. lmao i think your one of the very few people who would find that a good thing lol great update becky update ASAP emma lol xoxox
Tasha Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 haha great chapter Becky. Jacky's nudie run bless him!! More please
~Amy~ Posted January 4, 2007 Report Posted January 4, 2007 Great Chapter Becs. I'm all for the fight idea in the next chapter
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