vale4eva Posted March 17, 2007 Report Posted March 17, 2007 Awww, very cute! Why do those damn doorbells always go off at the wrong time in these fics Great chapter, (Cant wait till HSM 2! Yay! lol) Update soon
baby gurl Posted March 17, 2007 Report Posted March 17, 2007 ^^ Just what I was thinking although I used to love Saved by the bell!! The gurls are great...Soo funny...Great chapter..Glad you updated...More soon please..xx
HeavenForbid Posted March 17, 2007 Report Posted March 17, 2007 I am just read this fic from the every start! It is so good! Can't wait for an update
beckyboo Posted March 18, 2007 Report Posted March 18, 2007 ^^^ Thank youu Well I aint spoken to Emma in a while but i should update tonight lol!
loobieloo Posted March 18, 2007 Report Posted March 18, 2007 Aww cuteee chapter I love those little girls aww! Cant wait for that next updatee
beckyboo Posted March 18, 2007 Report Posted March 18, 2007 Chapter 29 Martha and Jack had been spending some quality time together they had no children in this house and no noise so it was very peaceful! Martha was just sitting there with Jack and they were going through the name book. “I like Laura” Jack said “I have a sister called Laura remember” “Yer she could be named after me” Laura said as she entered “Heyy” Martha and Jack both said “I like Lilly – Rose for a girl and Lewis for a boy” Martha said “Oh yeah there nice names” Laura said “Umm yeah not too sure about Lewis but I love Lilly – Rose” Jack said “Well we will change the boys one but are we agreed on the girls” she asked him “Of course” he said to her “Good” she said What jack didt know Martha secretly had a feeling it was a girl so the boys name was not really important but then again she could be wrong. Meanwhile “Amie I don’t feel very well” Abby moaned to Amie while watching High school Musical “Shhhhhhh Abby this is the best part” Amie said “But Amie I don’t feel very well I want mummy and daddy” she said to Amie “Abs mum and dad have not had a night alone together since well since forever and they need to sort baby stuff out so me and you and Ellis are staying with nana and granddad so please come and lie with me and ill pretend im mummy ok” Amie said to Abby “Okay” Abby said unhappily Tasha had just dropped Ellis off at Tony’s and she was on her back to Martha and Jacks to get ready for the date with drew tonight! “I think its time for me to have words with Tash about Drew yano like about the sex talk things” Martha said “You can’t be serious, Martha she’s 17 she’s not a baby” “No maybe not but she’s still my baby sister” she defended herself Later on that night around 9pm “Nana I don’t feel well I want mummy” Abby complained to Beth Beth knew Martha and Jack needed time alone “Sweetie you want to sleep with nana and granddad tonight then” Beth asked her “Nope I want stay with Amie” she cried a bit “Hey princess whats up with my favourite niece” Lucas asked as he walked in At the sight of Lucas Abby’s little eyes lit up “Uncle Luc can I sleep with you tonight please” she asked Luc in her sweetest voice “Of course you can princess” He replied The next day “Morning sleepy head” Jack said to Martha as she woke up in his arms “Hey” she replied sleepily “How long have you been watching me” she asked him “Bout an hour” he replied stroking her hair “Why” she asked trying not to laugh “Because I have to pinch myself every morning when I wake up with you” he said truthfully Meanwhile at Beth and Tony’s “Morning kids” Luc said to Amie and Ellis as he walked into the living room “Abby still asleep” Tony asked him “Yeah she had a bit of a restless night” he told his dad “Mummy” Amie said running towards Martha as she walked in and Ellis did the same to Jack “Hey babies” they both said “Hey were one missing” Jack said “Yeah come on you three we left three kids her” Martha joked “Yeah Abby’s still in bed I think she inherited Jacks laziness” Luc joked he decided not to worry Martha with Abby not sleeping well he would mention it to Jack later on “Well we best be going so ill go and get Abby” Martha said “Well why don’t we just leave her here and then Luc can bring her to us on the beach when she wakes up” Jack said “If you don’t mind Luc” Martha asked him “Nope of course not go and have fun” he said Two hours later “Mummy Ellis is knocking over my sandcastle” Amie complained “Ellis don’t do that sweetie” Martha said to him Martha was rested in between Jack legs she was using his chest as a pillow and he had his hands on her tummy when the baby started to move around” “Kids come here and feel this” Jack shouted Ellis and Amie put there hand on their mummy’s tummy “Baby moving” Ellis said pointing to Martha’s tummy “Yep that’s right clever boy” Martha said to him Ellis just giggled Back at Tony’s “Good morning sleepy head” Lucas said as Abby came into he room But before Abby could reply she fell to the floor unconscious An hour later Martha and Jack were on a secluded part of the beach and Jack had his phone on silent and Martha’s was at home “Hey you’ve reached the voicemail of Jack Holden please leave a message after the beep” the voice spoke” “Jack its Luc call me ASAP!” Luc said Meanwhile back in the hospital room “And shocking 123” the doctor replied “Come on Abs come on…” Luc was praying Preview? Is Abby ok? Will they get there in time? Does baby Holden want to join the world!
HeavenForbid Posted March 18, 2007 Report Posted March 18, 2007 Excellent update! Awwww........I really hope Abby is ok? She better be!
Tasha Posted March 18, 2007 Report Posted March 18, 2007 Abbbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...Becky dont let nothing happen to lil Abby. And, Jacky, Martha answer your phones for goodness sakes, your baby is in hospital. Kah! Stupid parents Jks Great chapter More please
vale4eva Posted March 18, 2007 Report Posted March 18, 2007 Becky! Im still not happy lol Dont let anything bad happen Update soon (with happiness )
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