Perfect Rainbow (by xGlowingAngelx) - comments

[Jack and Martha 4eva]

YAY. They slept together. And the baby might be Jack's. But knowing you, it won't be.

If Martha slept with Jack then why is she still with Carl. She must already know that Jack loves her.

What she said, but the baby WILL be Jack's and than they can live happily ever after. *Looks Hopefully*

We all know that Jack and Martha are meant to be

This is great writing, and as I'm not feeling very well I think to cheer me up you should update right now

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[tasha7905]

Great updates, I really hope the baby is jacks. He better still tell her how he feels about her. More soon please.

[Jacksthehottest]

Yay yay, thankyou for that, i would have never expected Martha to sleep with Jack, while she was engaged to Carl, loving it, hope the baby is Jack's update soon

[xsianx]

I'm happy they slept togther! I just hope that i'm going to stay happy

Fantastic writing! more soon please.

[Nicom]

I wasn't aware she was preggers. lol. Double shocker for me!

Wahay! Get in my son!

[xGlowingAngelx]

I wasn't aware she was preggers. lol. Double shocker for me!

lol. OMG, I just realised I never actually had her say she was pregnant, did I? Me thinks I need to sort that out.

[ljay]

I am really enjoying this fic. Great writing!!

[puja]

Me likes; I think!!

Please update soon; can't wait to hear Jack's reaction!

[xGlowingAngelx]

I wasn't aware she was preggers. lol. Double shocker for me!

Wahay! Get in my son!

I've added it in for Martha to conform she's pregnant, just before the flashback. Hope it makes more sense now.

[beckyboo]

OMG

Poor Jack!!!!!!!!!!!

She was a bit mean "you think i want to have a baby with my best friend"

YEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh

Jacks gonna be a daddy but Carls gonna get it!!!!!!!!

update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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