Traceve Posted September 14, 2006 Report Posted September 14, 2006 Thanks Aaron, Im just hoping to get at least one negative comment so I know if I can inprove it in any way for t he readers Tasha, I will never forget your name in that case Beckyboo, there will be some Paul and Jodi soon, for the sake of my sainty As otherwise I will never hear the end of it Quote
swfc Posted September 14, 2006 Report Posted September 14, 2006 Negative comments? Uhm, let's see.... There ain't heaps of Nic, Sarah and Emily scenes!! To be honest, there's nothing negative to say about this fic. You write beautifully. A very talented writer. Quote
Tasha Posted September 14, 2006 Report Posted September 14, 2006 Beckyboo, there will be some Paul and Jodi soon, for the sake of my sainty As otherwise I will never hear the end of it :D :D *evil laugh* Quote
Traceve Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 Here is a small Teaser “I cant, that’s impossible; we have only been together a month and your expecting me to sacrifice everything for you?” Amy said in disbelief. ‘Not everything babe...” Chris said as he lent over towards Amy to hold her. Amy flinched away. “This is crazy,” She said as she got up and paced the room backwards and forwards. Amy paused and looked at Chris. “Why did you tell me to warn my neighbors?” “Well, in case you said yes we could have celebrated,” Chris explained. “Get your head out of the gutter,” Amy sighed. Chris got off of the couch and stood behind her, putting his arms around her hips. “Please, just think about?” Chris asked her softly. She lent back with her head resting on his chest. “I will think about it. But I don’t think I will go with you,” Quote
aejdude Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 Great teaser! although i did think it was an update just then . Quote
shen Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 yay! great teaser! cant wait till the full chapter though. Any idea when it will be up? Quote
Traceve Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 Thanks Aaron and Shen Im working on the update now Quote
Tasha Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 Yaaaay. so we'll get an update before the end of the day?? Quote
Home and Away Always!!! Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 (edited) I just started reading this, and it's very good, but you said to say if we had any suggestions or comments? Well I have one. DON'T KILL INDI!!!! There you go. Is that the sort of thing you were looking for? P.S Sorry if I'm being harsh. Don't mean to be. Edited September 19, 2006 by Home and Away Always!!! Quote
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