-lolly- Posted May 23, 2006 Report Posted May 23, 2006 That was awesome!! Starting to not like Megan she seems sus...wondering what Marthas secret is aswell?? Cant wait to read the next chapter! Quote
-Jade- Posted May 23, 2006 Author Report Posted May 23, 2006 (edited) I agree with jackandmarthaluver, you have real talent - that was very well written! Great chapter but I'm not too happy about the Megan and daughter bit! It seems like everyone is out to split Jack and Martha up at the moment!! Anyways can't wait for the next chapter!! Edited May 23, 2006 by jackandmartha!!! Quote
~Angel~ Posted May 23, 2006 Report Posted May 23, 2006 i love ur fanfic!!! it's well written. Jack has a daughter, with another woman??!!!!!! please post the next chapter soon, i can't wait! Quote
Nicom Posted May 23, 2006 Report Posted May 23, 2006 :o!!! Jack has another daughter? Poor Martha. And I kind of guess poor Jack, he obviously doesn't know.. Poor kid too. lol Poor everyone! Apart from Megan. I have no sympathy towards her, she's obviously up to something... Update soon please! Quote
bell Posted May 23, 2006 Report Posted May 23, 2006 awwww poor everyone especially Martha and Jack loved the part with Orlando Bloom, but why do you have to write all of this stuff trying to brake them up even if it is very well written - i'll only be happy again if Martha and Jack dont brake up cause they are ment to be and live happily ever after is marthas secret that she is pregnant? if it is what a georgeus baby that would be Quote
linzie_mac01 Posted May 23, 2006 Report Posted May 23, 2006 Daughters and ex's aside, that was really cute! You write the most amzingly tender, romantic scenes (*big romantic sigh*) Poor Martha and poor Jack, he is so not going to know whats hit him when he gets back I reckon Megan is telling a major fib though (well i hope she is), which would be the cruellest thing ever to do to a person. But then again, how else would she know Jack? Please don't leave me like this for too long, I have so many unanswered questions! Quote
da_love_goddess Posted May 24, 2006 Report Posted May 24, 2006 Bay girl I really love your fan fic, it is so grea. Well, I hope you update soon. Quote
princess_jessik Posted May 24, 2006 Report Posted May 24, 2006 Mhmmm, and the guy was very attractive and very sexy,” she continued. “Was he just?” Jack played along. “Yep. Orlando Bloom makes me so hot,” she started. “You were there too. But you were the servant,” she continued, trying to hold in her laugh. hahahaha lol that's so funny! Imo Orlando is ugly.... Thanks for the update bay-girl. I'm hooked to this story already! Quote
tasha7905 Posted May 24, 2006 Report Posted May 24, 2006 Fantastic writing. Loving the romance between them, Cant believe Megan just blurted it out like that. Poor Martha. Please post again soon. Quote
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