Only You (by bay girl) - comments

[Nicom]

Omg I loved it. Jack was so sweet at the beggining and then the Tony bit was so funny and the Coleen bit was so in character, and everything was just perfect! One of my favourite chapters - fantastic writing - you made me laugh and go awwwww. lol Please update asap!

What she said *points*

Don't you know that it's rude to point Nicole?!

Ha ha ha ha ha ha... *glares*

[[.jessa-belle.]]

Haha That was a classic chapter Amber great writing, Loved how Jack wanted to get Martha a pillow so cute, he really cares for her, and what he said when they were in bed, lol some of it was funny But mostley loving Loved it cant wait for the next.....and cant wait for the next in "Cry to me"

[-Annie-]

Wonderful! Gosh, I could read JM fluff all day....

Brilliant brilliant brilliant! The description was fab, and I could feel the emotion!

More, more, more!

[dolly-999]

Poor Martha stuck in the middle of a big decision, hope she chooses carefully.

Great chapter Amber.

[Tasha]

Awww...poor Martha. Move in with Jack, or i will But i see where shes coming from. It is too early. But why is she upset. Maybe she says no and Jacks gets angry, thus leaving Martha upset. Awww...poor drama. Bur grat as alwayz. Loving it

Please update soon

[-lolly-]

Wonder why Martha doesnt wanna move in with Jack..hmmm. As always great chapter bay girl!

[-michelle-]

Great chapter. Please update soon.

[Clair 247]

Another brilliant chapter! Can't wait to see what her decision is and find out why she's upset! Hope everything's alright! Please update soon!

[shawtyy]

Great chapter! Wonder why Martha is upset .

[xsianx]

great chapter.

Jack wouldn't have to ask me twice lol I probely wouldn't wait for an invite either...

Looking forwrad to teh next chapter.