Only You (by bay girl) - comments

[xGlowingAngelx]

OK, I don't know if I was meant to, but I knew it was going to be a dream. Poor Mac. How much can she take? She'll have to paint the room with rainbows and bright colours to help her feel better.

awww bless. Update soon.

[puja]

What a scarey dream to have

Great writing though! Please update soon

Edited September 19, 2006 by puja

[Clair 247]

Nicole has scared me into thinking that an unhappy ending is on the cards, please don't let this baby die! The whole dressed in white thing seems just a little like angels and heaven for my liking! Please don't do this to us and please update soon! Fantastic writing as ever!

[xGlowingAngelx]

Nicole has scared me into thinking that an unhappy ending is on the cards,

Don't listen to Nicole. She doesn't know what she's talking about. Just keep telling yourself everything will work out fine.

[-Annie-]

^Amen to that.

Freaky dream...poor Mac.

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

[-ParaisGal-]

Nothing better happen to this baby! Hehe keep goin'!

Edited September 20, 2006 by Home&AwayGal

[Tasha]

Uh oh, its either Jack, Martha or Baby Holden thats in danger, and i pray its not Martha or the baby, or Jack, but yeh the baby cant be harmed. Great chapter though.

Please update soon

[xsianx]

Aww! poor Martha.

Damn Ken Harper!!! I want to know why he didnt tell Jack aswell!!!!!!!

Lol you should know I just got busted by my health and social teacher beacuse I'm supposed to be researching ADHD and I'm on here he is not impressed.

Anyway before he kills me.... Great chapter.

Edited September 20, 2006 by xsianx

[puja]

Great update!

Please don't let it be Martha or Jack in danger!

[-michelle-]

Great chapter. Please update soon