dolly-999 Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 Well done Amber, you write both Jack and Martha so well, well actually you write all the characters really well. But anyway, I loved that chapter, it's nice that they haven't been fighting anymore and that any cows like Megan are out of the way . Quote
puja Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 Love all the Martha and Jack fluffiness...and you write it so well...really in tune with the characters! Another great chapter; I want the baby to some soon. The idea of a baby Holden is just so sweet! Can't wait to read more!! Quote
Tasha Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 YAY Baby Holden is finally coming. Excitement. And Martha was really funny throughout the chapter, and Ric's onliner at the end Great chapter Please update soon Quote
ldscott Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 Martha slapped his hand away. “That’s mine. Touch it again and I’ll stab you with my fork,” she warned. Love it! Brilliant chapter, please post again soon! Quote
puja Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 I loved the way that was written! “I think Martha just wet her pants,” Ric joked That's just plain funny! Baby Holden on its way! *yay* Quote
Clair 247 Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 Woohoo! Baby Holden is on the way! Just need to make sure that Daddy Jack is there to see it happen! Please let it all be ok, I have a horrible feeling that these last two chapters of happiness are going to be cruelly undone! Please update soon! Quote
[.jessa-belle.] Posted September 28, 2006 Report Posted September 28, 2006 OMG I cant wait for the next chapter!!!Jack get home right right right now!!!Or i will hunt you down and slowly kill you will a fork. Or if Mc Ga=rath doesnt let you i will hunt him dopwn!!! Quote
-lolly- Posted September 29, 2006 Report Posted September 29, 2006 Yay baby Holdens coming!!! I hope Jack gets there in time. Please update soon. Quote
ldscott Posted September 29, 2006 Report Posted September 29, 2006 YAY! Please post again soon, I can't wait to read on! Quote
shawtyy Posted September 29, 2006 Report Posted September 29, 2006 Hope Jack gets there on time! Great chapter, Update soon. Quote
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