Cerise Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 Loving this! I like the way you describe Mattie's feelings, it makes you kind of lost in her Confusion. I also like the way you brought in what her Familie is doing right now. I definitley cant wait for an Update! Awesome work! Quote
~Amy~ Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 Mattie and Ric Awwww you have to continue, you just have to! Quote
>>Emma<< Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 This is great, love the way how you have explained where all of her family are! Can't wait for the next update. Will Jack and Martha be in this at all? Please update soon, can't wait to read more! Quote
summer_bay_rules Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 Thanks guys! JackandMartha4eva - Jack and Martha will make an appearance in the next chapter. Quote
~Amy~ Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 Jack and Martha will make an appearance in the next chapter. Yay! My two favourite couples! Quote
matty and luke forever Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 Thsi is great! I can't wait for more! Quote
loobieloo Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 Great chapter, cant wait for more Quote
shortie_689 Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 Totally the best I love it!!! I can't wait till you update!!! Hope Matilda can work it all out with Ric!!! Quote
Danifan Posted December 10, 2006 Report Posted December 10, 2006 Great start. Anything about Ric and Matilda has me hooked. Well Done. Quote
tasha7905 Posted December 11, 2006 Report Posted December 11, 2006 Brilliant start, You desribe Mattie's feelings so well I could actually picture her driving around the bay. I hope there is more soon. Quote
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